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Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I'm gutted. It's so beautiful. MOre?

Reviewer: Jana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/02/24 11:48 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Uuhh! No.

How can it be that beautiful and that perfectly sad? Freaking wow. I'm slayed.

Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/01/22 12:54 am
Title: Chapter 1

Uuhh! No.

How can it be that beautiful and that perfect? Freaking wow. I'm slayed.

Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/01/22 12:54 am
Title: Chapter 1

The grief is real enough to touch. I've read loads of tragedy storiies but none where the author has me convinced that the griever is talking to the person they are grieving. This conversation is one we've seen. Miss Parker demanding she isn't her mother, Jarod insisting to talk about Catherine anyway. Then the knife twist. You're a master story teller.

Reviewer: Daniel P Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/01/22 10:34 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful. Tragic.

Reviewer: lisa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/01/22 11:01 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Exquisite.

I'm in tears.

Reviewer: shauna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/01/22 05:18 am
Title: Chapter 1

The grief is so real I can feel it. Gut punch much, Mirage? Exquisite gut punch but painful even so. More of this please?

Reviewer: Ricky Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/01/22 09:07 pm
Title: Chapter 1

ugh this is a sucker gut punch. I know I haven't reviewed any of your work until now. I've been a shy lurker and then I thought how courageous all authors are and decided to tell you how I feel. I feel really upset by this and really honored that I got to read this. Your prose is beautiful.

Reviewer: Joni Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/01/22 03:05 am
Title: Chapter 1

Am upset you won't be continuing this but I understand. It's perfect stand alone but I love your writing and will always welcome a continuation.

Reviewer: Con-O Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/22 12:51 am
Title: Chapter 1

Why is your writing too addictive? This can't be the ending. It's so tragic.

Reviewer: Ashley Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/12/21 11:06 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Oh no you DIDN'T! lol yeah you did but you did it so perfectly and beautifully and with Jarod hurting so prettifully that you get away with it. YOU should be named Dark Angel. Damnnnn! Sequel this please.

Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/12/21 07:16 am
Title: Chapter 1

I almost missed this one!

Oh, wow. Wow.

So much wow.

Tragic. Poignant.

I love it.

Reviewer: Jameason Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/12/21 06:14 am
Title: Chapter 1

A new story from Mirage is always a special surprise. What you've done here is tragic and beautiful, and I don't think Jarod would ever recover from losing her to Raines in a violent way. He wants her to work in the Centre and give him inforrmation about his family. He knows that her mother was killed by Raines and that Parker is in danger every moment she works at the Centre. I think Jarod would feel responsible for her murder and for once be directly responsible for a murder committed by someone else. He's been playing with fire for too long and it's a matter of time before Parker burns for it. I love the way you presented this to us. It's genius. You're a genius. I've never seen anyone say so much, so precisely, in so few words. Bravo! More, please?

Have a beautiful holiday and new year!

Ciao!



Author's Response:

Sighs. I know I'm "not supposed to disagree with reviewers," however-- dude. I'm not a genius. I type words (my brain no longer even attempts to keep up with my fingers), and sometimes they almost makes sense, but usually not. Okay, moving on.

I enjoy reading your thoughts regarding the series and this scribblet. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I wish you the same.

Reviewer: Michael Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/12/21 08:11 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I am having feelings...like so many feelings right now. Your writing is amazing. what you write is amazing too and sometimes so amazingly heartbreaking. I hurt for Jarod. Uhhh. Mirage Mirage. Big sighs. You break me. I want you to break me some more. I love your writing.



Author's Response:

Should I apologize? 

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Gunner.

Reviewer: Gunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/12/21 09:06 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Oh. Oh!! This is too plausible and I have been afraid that this would happen to Miss Parker. Jarod's reaction is what I'd expect after trying so hard to save her from Alex and on the tarmac when she was shot. Oh, wow. SO short and so poignant. You're the best.



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks for reading, Xena, and for the generous review.

Reviewer: Xena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/12/21 10:00 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Oh, wow. Poignant and so so so tragic. Congrats!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jarod&MissParker4ever.

Reviewer: Jarod&MissParker4ever Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/21 04:57 am
Title: Chapter 1

Scribblet? lol. Hardly! This is heavily profound! There is so much passion and pain and story in this tiny short short. It's a work of magic and I'm grateful that you share your amazing talent with us. I'm always blown off my feet by you. Thank you for keeping the dream alive.



Author's Response:

Magic? This is not the review I anticipated. Major character death and not a single person threatened me. I'm shocked. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Cal.

Reviewer: Cal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/21 12:39 am
Title: Chapter 1

Aack! You killed me! It's totes cool tho. Raines would do something like this. He killed mom, too. Guess I'm like mom after all. Face. Name.... oh, so my first name is Catherine. I like that. Killed by Raines. Headstone. I get to actually be in her  coffin.

I just want to know how you are able to come up with teh orginale and didn't even use 100 words?! Holy amazeballs. I'm glad Jarod is crying for me. More please?



Author's Response:

Okay, I see what you're doing there, THE Miss Parker.

Thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/12/21 09:15 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Top notch as always. You leave me wanting more again. Do I ever ask? More please?



Author's Response:

There will be no more of this. Sorry.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Con-O.

Reviewer: Con-O Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/12/21 04:24 am
Title: Chapter 1

Didn't sign on just want to say I love this and hope it didn't come from a place too dark. I Sometimes wonder where Mirage if you experienced so much death or abuse but you stay in my thoughts. Much love. More?



Author's Response:

This is fiction. Nothing more. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kayla.

Reviewer: Kayla Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/12/21 08:45 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Oh, wow, this is magical and painful. I love it. Jarod hurts so pretty. More?



Author's Response:

Jarod does hurt beautifully, doesn't he? Also, I'm going to mention here that I don't know why my response to the review below yours (to Amelia) is evidently now a partially, cute blue link to nowhere. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Lacy.

Reviewer: Lacy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/12/21 06:12 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Stunning piece, powerful and poignant for so few words. You've taken quality over quantity to bold new heights. The story itself is beautifully crafted even if numbing and heartwrenchingly tragic. Will you be sharing with us more from the Mirarchives? Please? Thank you.



Author's Response:

I will be sharing, as promised, at least more monstrosity from the dreaded Mirarchives to sort of tie up Asphyxia and Wild Horses (and, as requested, I'll change those ficlets to a series). Thanks for reading and reviewing, Amelia.

Reviewer: Amelia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/12/21 09:17 pm
Title: Chapter 1

You are deliciously evil and still my favorite. More more more.



Author's Response:

Haha. Thanks for saying I'm evil. I never get to be evil in real life. I've never even been allowed to pretend I'm evil, not even in the middle school play. Finally. I've arrived at evildom. Finally. Also, thanks for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Felicia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/12/21 07:52 pm
Title: Chapter 1

you are not lying about it being horrible because so much pain and loss but there is beauty too the way Jarod loves her and hopes she will rest in peace because of that love for her. You wrrite as someone who has experienced loss. I love how beautifully written it is and how we don't know in the beginning that she is gone. I would like to read from the Mirarchives and more from you now too please. Thank you for sharing with us and keeping the spirit of this series alive.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Sela.

Reviewer: Sela Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/12/21 07:03 pm
Title: Chapter 1

You've done it again. Top notch all the way. I was positive that Jarod and MP were having another round of banter or a heated conversation but Jarod has lost it or MP was there like her mother speaking from beyond or she might have said she's nothing like her as she was dying but we don't know how she died. Top notch mate. I look for more from you. Cheers.



Author's Response:

Nice. I like the idea that Parker is exacctly like her mother and haunting Jarod, and after all those years of tormenting Parker he sort of has it coming. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Jake.

Reviewer: Jake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/12/21 06:48 pm
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