I love the pace and that I'm not bogging down in a lot of detail. COVID brain has me out here hating excessive descriptive work. The basics are all I need. You covered that, told us how she pissed Jarod off, got herself abducted, where she is , described the van experience and that she can't see beyond the room, what the place looks like and explained that surgery happened. You describe enough but not too much. That's a fine line and you walk it well.  This is fast paced and ooh you really hate Air Supply don't you? Jarod made that band a joke in the Junkie episode and I guess we can assume he discovered it's not the ventilation system but a band. I can see this spiraling between them and since he does use control this way and has used his power as a weapon in the past and committed organ theft this has plausibility. I'll never not read a fic that contains rapey Jarod. That's how plausible this is. More. I love the dark.

Keep going.

Well done.

Bring the wicked Jarod! He's so much more covincing when he's being bad, committing cries, stealing kidneys, making little housewives think they will be raped by him [Gigolo Jarod].

I'm definitely interested in reading more. I think Jarod might be more wicked than Miss P. I don't usually go in for Miss Parker having a name other than Parker but I like Max. You've got my attention. Use it well.