He has manipulated the situation in such a way that Parker has no choice but to trust and stay with him.
Such a DarkJarod move!
Noice!
Reviewer: Miss Shanon Signed




Date: 18/03/25 08:47 pm
I'm interested in and scared of where this goes next.
Keep writing.
Reviewer: Jen Signed




Date: 18/03/25 06:23 am
Oh snap every choice was hers in this although the elements of coercion exist because she is forced to make the choices or endure bad outcomes.
Jarod designed his game to make her reliant on him.
Well done.
I want more.





Date: 17/03/25 03:52 am
The detail is so nice and yeah dohh Jarod can be bad and he is capable of this..
Reviewer: Monica Signed




Date: 17/03/25 03:50 am
Ohh so dark.
Reviewer: Monica Signed




Date: 17/03/25 03:47 am
I don't blame her for not obeying him.
She's Parker. She will do her own thing.
I enjoying binge reading you.





Date: 17/03/25 03:24 am
Being on Jarods bad side like this is never fun for anyone.
Great writing.





Date: 17/03/25 03:23 am
I love the writing voice here. The comparison to a child afraid of a clown is so telling and accurate.
That last sentence. Oomph.
I fear for Parker.





Date: 17/03/25 03:20 am
Oh. This is intriguing already !
Reviewer: Monica Signed




Date: 17/03/25 03:17 am
I just read the entire thing. Wow. Soooo dark, but I couldn't stop reading. You are my first btw. My first review. Way to pop it!
Reviewer: ClaireBear Signed




Date: 13/03/25 09:22 pm
Ouches. This is not easy to read at all. Must have been a pill to write it all out with the stunning detail and medically accurate detail.
Not many people even acknowledge female ejaculation. Only ONE other author here that I'm aware ofh as even referred it, but subtly, by writing "never been so much evidence of orgasm" and I'm miserably misquoting that and parapharsing. It was Mirage I'm certain. Just confirmed that it was Circles Of Hell by Mirage and she implies what happens in her own subtle way and I think someone took issue with even that because people... are gonna take issue. Some people think women don't orgasm at all.
I have to grin any time I read sex here! I love it!
Any time authors break from the pack, chew off the leashes and run feral to do their own thing a reviewer is going to have an issue.
I'm curious to know what happens next.
Reviewer: Jarod Signed





Date: 12/03/25 09:39 pm
You're really going to go there where few dare to tread because they know some reviewers don't understand how Jarod could be dark... even though Jarod has shown his darkness repeatedly to us.Even MTW said in a commentary that he wanted Jarod to be darker.. and "darkER" means already dark. But explaining this to dim dim people is a wsste of time.
Brave one.
Reviewer: Jarod Signed




Date: 12/03/25 09:29 pm
You are not an Air Supply fan. Got it.
Very fast paced and a lot of drama. Scary Jarod.
THe chapters could be longer. That's about my only issue/
Reviewer: Jarod Signed




Date: 12/03/25 09:27 pm
Did NOT expect that. I guess I should have.
What did Air Supply do to you?
Yeah, lol, I hate that song too. Not to point of wanting to puke but yeah, it's bad.
Jarod is so Jarod.
Parker's being drugged and brain-screwed so we can expect this from her.
Delightfully dark.
Reviewer: Jarod Signed




Date: 12/03/25 09:25 pm
Oh MY God. Very dark. Getting darker still. The reading is easy and it's like a train. So fast.
Reviewer: Jarod Signed




Date: 12/03/25 09:23 pm
This is escalating quicker than I thought it might. Well done.
Reviewer: Jarod Signed




Date: 12/03/25 09:20 pm
Uh-oh, Parker just made a mistake. Those images of MTW I just saw in here mean bad things happen here and she wiill regret that mistake.
I watched Iowa, the top image, and the Malibu Rd. series, and both Freeway and Freeway 2. Larry, Roger, Larry, guy in a box car, and I dunno how many more times one can man play a rapist or child molester. He does it so well. That's a problem with the best actors. They make it look real.
As for Jarod we know Jarod is bad and can do this. Look what he did to that dude he broke out of a Mexican prison. Sliced him open and stole his kidney wiithout conset...withdrawn consent= screaming no= NO = no consent. Jarod's math on that one doesn't add up. Rape is the same thing. Assault is assault. Surgery without consent is assault. That's just the law. But Jarod breaks laws every time he breathes and impersonates someone so...
I guess I'm buckling in for darkness.
Reviewer: Jarod Signed




Date: 12/03/25 09:16 pm
Very dark. I have to wonder how you will resolve this.
Reviewer: Michael Signed




Date: 11/03/25 08:53 pm
Yeah ðŸ‘🽠Jarod has the mindset that this is revenge and that's the juvenile part of him he won't stop justify any revenge.
He is a psychopath.yiu did this well. I want to know what happens now
Keep going please! 😠💪ðŸ½
Reviewer: Leslie Signed




Date: 11/03/25 05:56 pm
I can't stop reading.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed





Date: 11/03/25 05:52 pm
Oooooo😮🥴
I don't have words.
Just some emojis.
This doesn't surprise me. It's Jarod.
He IS dark.
He believes he knows what justice is.
He's still juvenile enough to think he has to make people pay and this makes sense in a way.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed




Date: 11/03/25 05:51 pm
I mean.... It's Jarod so anything literally any thing is plausible no limits at all to what he might do.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed




Date: 11/03/25 05:47 pm
Ooh getting darker. I love it and I hate it 😂 ðŸ˜
Reviewer: Leslie Signed




Date: 11/03/25 05:45 pm