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Title: Chapter 28

Absolutely exquisite from beginning to ending and a almost happy ending. Squee. I love it. Always in character, always keeping me hanging on the edge of my seat.

Take a bow.

Reviewer: Xena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/06/23 04:41 am
Title: Chapter 28

Bravo! I'm always impressed and happy to read you. I say a sad goodbye to this beautiful novella and look forward to reading updates and hopefully thousands more stories from you. Congratulations.

Reviewer: Revenant Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/06/23 03:47 am
Title: Chapter 28

I'm pleasantly surprised by this final chapter. In life things sometimes aren't always so pat and it can take years to set things straight, and this accurately reflects that reality. This pair has some things to work out, some painful conversations and we don't have to witness that. You imply it will happen. Jarod seems to want to talk while having coffee and slow things down physically and I think that's wise. This is, like all you write, eloquent and beautiful. Congratulations! Thank you for sharing with us your natural gifts. Ciao!

Reviewer: Michael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/06/23 11:08 pm
Title: Chapter 28

Oh I love it thank you!

It is beautiful and powerful.

Reviewer: April L Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/06/23 04:14 am
Title: Chapter 28

Oops I clicked submit accidentally. I was saying I'm glad you have other works still in progress and grateful that you completed this and other works . I love their story in this,, and that you give them a hopeful future and it was a perfect way to conclude this one. Not an ending but a beautiful beginning

. Thank you mirage!

Reviewer: Felicia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/06/23 07:23 pm
Title: Chapter 28

I wasn't ready for this to be over. I never want it to end, and that's because your writing and storytelling is so eloquent and smooth, rich like molasses and sometimes just as dark and sweet. I'm relieved that you have other works still being updated

 

Reviewer: Felicia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/06/23 07:19 pm
Title: Chapter 28

Ooh, I love this. It's a happy ending as far as they have are happy and to get pastries and espresso, and "infinite possibilities" and I think this must have been hard for you to write being that you're a nonshipper and you saw through Jarod billed as a "good" guy from the beginning on the tv series. You are right. He isn't "good." You see the real but you also see the potential I think, and that there is something between them. You never let your personal feelings get in the way of the story that needs to be told. That's important. I love your writing voice. It's powerful and energetic, and new energy and vision is important to keeping the series alive. I was afraid you were going to abandon this but you haven't abandoned a story yet, so please never do. Keep writing and sharing. It's goodbye to Darkness Falling but not goodbye to us and your other fics, ok? Don't stop writing. We need you. Always grateful to you.

Reviewer: Monica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/06/23 04:00 am
Title: Chapter 1

I will miss this being updated but I am glad there are other of your works to read. My English Is not so good in writing. My friend is fluent and is not here to help me this time to write a review. I love this. Thank you for share your works.

Reviewer: Archange Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/06/23 05:18 am
Title: Chapter 1

I will miss this being updated but I am glad there are other of your works to read. My English Is not so good in writing. My friend is fluent and is not here to help me this time to write a review. I love this. Thank you for share your works.

Reviewer: Archange Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/06/23 05:18 am
Title: Chapter 28

I was glued to this story from start to finish. Exquisite work. Exquisite.

Reviewer: valerie_ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/06/23 12:07 am
Title: Chapter 28

Oh yes this is perfect, a beautiful ❤️😍 continue of their story instead of a' the end'... I love this. I'm crying 😂 stupid laugh crying. Thank you from the whole of my heart!

Reviewer: Jen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/06/23 09:58 pm
Title: Chapter 28

THIS IS HOW IT IS DONE!!

I echo the others who say you should be writing the novels. Please can't we share you on Facebook and Twitter?? I don't even use those anymore because there was nothing else to do there but if we could share you... I'd have a reason to use them.

You are the best!

Thank you for all the entertainment, tears, laughter, 😲 shocks, and more.

Now get on to updating the other stories and write new ones please.

I love you!

Reviewer: Leese Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/06/23 04:10 pm
Title: Chapter 28

Congratulations 🎉 Mirage!

I think this might be my new favorite. I can't say enough how amazing and spot on the characterisations are . I just want more and more.  Thank you for keeping them alive!

Reviewer: Con-O Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/06/23 04:29 am
Title: Chapter 28

Oh snap this is fucking brilliant. This is seriously the best! It's been awesome from the word go!

You should have been writing those "official" novels all along. They don't seem to be able to finish those either sadly and it is one disappointment after another with the TV series and the official novels and web  page and that makes me appreciate you and other ff authors and this beautiful page of jacci's even more. Please never stop writing. What would we do without fanfic...I don't want to know.

Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/06/23 03:09 am
Title: Chapter 28

Top shelf my mate. Margaret alluding to the major's more aggressive tactics when Jarod doesn't kick open the door and then I get the impression that she was with Jarod outside but then floated right through the door to join the other ghosts and Parker. This is all spectacularly written and I know it's over now but I will revisit in coming years. There is humor, action, adventure, drama, trauma, and the love interests. I'm not into fanfic so much but this held my attention and is fiction at it's finest. Pats on the back and kudos.

Reviewer: King Of Pain Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/06/23 07:36 pm
Title: Chapter 28

Firstly congratulations 🎉🎉 and secondly 😱 omg I love this so much. The ghosts, Parker's idea of safe sex "one hand on the gun even when she f***" omg and Thomas wishing he hadn't heard it.

Thomas was a major part of her life and it would be a disservice not to include him especially after how he haunted her earlier in this story. The house also deserves some mentions and you wrapped it up beautifully. I never want it to end but this one has 😢..

Amazing work. Thank you for writing , sharing and for  all the feels. Love that nostalgic just like watching them on TV feeling.

Reviewer: shauna Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/06/23 05:36 am
Title: Chapter 28

Oh, I love that you have all the emotional scenes and I hoped you would and I love it all so much. This cements even more your talent and skill as an author. It seems like you're warming up to Jarod or...maybe just Michael ”? You keep me guessing always. This is so stunning this work, and the way you wrote the last chapter. I feel so happy that I got to read it.

Reviewer: Lacy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/06/23 03:34 am
Title: Chapter 28

Woot woot you did it 🎊‘ and I knew you could. This one I'll be coming back to....yes, I come back to everything you've written. You're that amazing 😍🤩.

 

Reviewer: Cal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/06/23 09:09 pm
Title: Chapter 28

Ahhhhh. this is one of the most enjoyable reads, if not the most.

I love how Jarod and Miss Parker say they love each other without saying the word love.

I love that Miss Parker apologizes without saying that word or sorry.

I love this beautiful story of healing and forgiveness and making peace and love.

Subtle, not too subtle. This is Pretender perfect.

Thank you for writing, a labor of love I know, because you do it for free and you won't even let us share you on Twitter and Facebook and spotlight you. You are keeping the dream alive. Please continue to.

With all the gratitude in the world thank you.

Reviewer: needlepoint Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/06/23 07:46 pm
Title: Chapter 28

Whoa 😲 congratulations 🎉 and you did a hell of a job cinching this up to perfection. It's not too pat, it's emotional without being syrupy or cheesy. Thomas is hilarious 😂 as always. The ghosts were eavesdropping and it serves them right. I love that you included them and the house. It is all beautiful. I'm amazed.

Reviewer: Gunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/06/23 06:55 am
Title: Chapter 28

Impressive as always Mirage!

Evocative and provocative. You've always been an outisde of the box author and you've really developed these characters and you have definitely defined your voice as an author.

I can't believe you aren't writing the novels! I've said it before. Someone has to say it!

Thanks for staying with the writing. I value your work and your powerful voice. I'll miss this universe. Every word is well placed from the first word. I'm grateful that I can come back and read, and that you are writing several other universes that I can immerse myself in.

Congratulations!

Reviewer: twisted Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/06/23 04:48 am
Title: Chapter 28

Top notch, mate, from beginning to end. You are a wordsmith and a hell of a storyteller.

Reviewer: Jake Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/06/23 02:40 am
Title: Chapter 28

Now that's how it's done!

Hell of a ride! I will be coming back to read this one again and again. Thank you so much, Mirage.

Reviewer: nopiupiroie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/06/23 01:51 am
Title: Chapter 28

Oh yay 😀 I love all of this. Was really afraid that it might end with them not speaking again, but you pulled it off brilliantly and plausibly in such a gratifying way! Thank for this from my ❤️. I know it's over but I still want more. Bravo Mirage! Take a bow!

 

 

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/06/23 10:13 pm
Title: Chapter 1

my review I just posted is a hot mess co I'm crying. it should say nod not 'nid' and . you're 'NOT wrong tho' about the scent thing. hard to see what I typed thru blurry eyes

Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/06/23 05:03 pm
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