that sex scene is so special. i love how you captrue jarods thoughts when he enters her and recognizes that she hadn't been with another man since tommy and how strong she was for him. also how they grief together and the way jarod lights their mood at the same time. so incredible well written. i'm so deeply impressed how you imagine all this.
Author's Response:
Well smut is not really my strong point. But I tried to write it down as I "feel" it.
I don't think between them would be something hard or "weird", you know as in other fanfics I've read.
I think it would be the most natural thing.
Reviewer: lipamo Signed [Report This]Date: 01/05/14 02:30 pm
i love that he's the weak one for once. and the way mp rises to the occation and grwos so much is wonderful to see. their developement is so natural.
Author's Response:
That was the first idea that came in my mind. I wanted Jarod to be the weak one, for once in a lifetime.
And it seems I was right ;)
Reviewer: lipamo Signed [Report This]Date: 01/05/14 12:31 pm
that conversation betwenn mp and syd at the end is soo endearing! and the way you pull so much atmosphere from the page is so great, so touching. love it. Although i've already read it, it's again just as wondeerful as the first time to read. now is even better, because i don't feel this urgent rush to hurry through it :), my addiction is well covered now.
Author's Response:
I love Parker and Sydney's relationship, I've always felt it could lead anywhere, even more than Jarod and Syd's one. I feel like he's actually a father to her, to both of them.
Reviewer: lipamo Signed [Report This]Date: 01/05/14 12:19 pm
so incredibly sweet and so much authenticity .. like ~ "i hope for your sake that you eather rob me or kill me because I'm to tired for anything else" - that's sooooo fucking good, i was laughing in astonishment. love your writing, but that's nothing new. by the way: i read one of phenyx stories and it was good, but the story a bit too strange and heavy (for me at least. it was the one when parker seduced him just to let lyle catch him and jarod changed into that emotionless businessman). so i still like your style and storylines better.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I enjoyed writing that line. I know what story of Phenyx you're talking about and it's very cool. I love the way she describes J's faults and Parker's good qualities.
Anyway, I'm so glad you still enjoy my style, thanks :P
Reviewer: lipamo Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/05/14 11:41 am
i am so happy about this story, i can't even begin to tell you. unregistered, i've read it til chapter 7 last night (til 2am) because i couldn't stop. I really am an addict for your style and imagination.
i read it again now anyway the following days and review each chapter, maybe i can beta-read it too, when my time management :) and energy allow is.
Author's Response:
Ah ah, then you read it all yesterday night! You're the best ;)
I'm looking forward for your reviews :P I appreaciate all your comments. And I promise an update very soon, maybe during the week!
Miss Roxy
Reviewer: lipamo Signed
[Report This]Date: 28/04/14 12:46 pm
“What kind of genius would seriously ponder words coming from a insane sociopath?” loved this line. But, it got the point across to boy genius didn't it?
Author's Response:
You know that I added this line just before updating the chapter, while I was reading it to find mistakes? :) so glad you liked it. And I added the "n" I had forgotten, too. Thanks ;)
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]Date: 31/03/14 03:41 pm
Finally, some secrets revealed. Loved the update tP soulsister!
Author's Response:
I really enjoyed writing this chapter. I love trying to "imagine" how things would have gone. A few months ago I had this conversation with other people of the fandom, saying that Jarod had been "selfish" because he'd kept Catherine's diary. I mean, we didn't even know if he ever read it or delivered it to Miss Parker! That was a point I wanted to straight out. As much as other few things that I really loved in both Miss Parker and Jarod's moments of weakness...
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]Date: 31/03/14 03:28 pm
Loved this chapter. The heart to heart between MP & J. Finally talking to each other and not as adversaries. I especially loved the part about Argyle running a casino called The Vatican. Classic!
Your smut was classy smut, not trashy smut. It was absolutely fine.
Author's Response:
You know I love Argyle, I think he really is Jarod's best friend. I'm sure he totally trusts him, even to ask help for saving the lives of the people Jarod loves most.
And this heart-to-heart was really due. You know I'm a hopeless shipper, it was only a matter of time.
And I'm thankful for you comment about the smut part. That's not my strongest quality in writing, you know... =) Couldn't get much over that ;)
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]Date: 31/03/14 03:24 pm
Well that was depressing! And totally believable. It's a wonder Jarod didn't completely fall apart with all of the things he saw and had happen to him!
Author's Response:
I know, it was depressing while I was writing it, too. And yet necessary. Tomorrow another update, I promise!
Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/02/14 09:30 pm
Wow! Nice update. But, Oh No! Damn Lyle! He killed Ethan!
Author's Response:
And it's not over yet. Stay tuned. More updates soon. I promise ;)
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/14 09:35 pm
Definitely, Sydner was more a father to MP than "Daddy" ever was. Nice update, of course, it left me wanting more. Great Job!
Author's Response:
You ask, you're served. :) Enjoy the new chapter!
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]Date: 10/02/14 07:38 pm
I'm enjoying it! Can't wait for more. Please!
Author's Response:
Ah Ah, thanks. And I'm going to add something new very soon, hopefully next week! :) Maybe before.
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]Date: 29/01/14 04:04 pm
Interesting start. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks sweetie, can't wait to update it. Soon, I promise.
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]Date: 29/01/14 03:55 pm
