oh wow, what a temper. and to let him walk home? that's kinda mean. at jarod's place, I would be really pissed at her. yes, his lie about Lyle wasn't cool either. but that's completely overreacting. she made her point clear by not really kissing him and telling him to sleep on the couch that night.

anyway, it's a wonderful opportunity to establich family dynamics and you do that extraordinary well. also you show us the children's characters in relation to their parents a bit more and that's just beautiful.

i'm so grateful that you found the time to write although you're getting married. - congratulations!!! I wish you the very best and it seems you found it already. But there'll be more to come. Thanks so much! I'll be here, patiently waiting for your next chapter. Have a nice one

wow, i have to say: many people tried to write a good reunion-scene between jarod and his  mother. but i never really had the impression that it really worked, it never felt right. but your scene - i have to, is awesome. really lovely how you describe it and it seems real. also miss parkers speech and conversation with jarod's father: really really well written, i was on my toes. also how jarod reacts is beautifully realistic and not too cheesy. the only thing i could critic on is the little note how j and mp moved closer to jarods parents as they meet again: hand in hand. it was sweet, but in my tastes a little bit too sweet. anyway, it wasn't important to me and i LOVEd this chapter. soo looking forward what you got in store about lyle and master parker... i'm stoked! thanks so much again and again.

Nice intro notes. This is your fic. You decide who lives and dies- and that's the way it SHOULD be. I'm enoying this- the lover spats in particular. No, I didn't see it coming.

I don't know who the alias person is (I've never watched much tv), however, I enjoyed this chapter. Lyle is just rotten (and easy on the eyes), wonderfully rotten.

I can't tell you how relieved I am that the Brootster is safe. You had me worried there for a second. I'm still enjoying this.

I have to make myself stop here, pause to review. I'm enjoying this. They tackled the dreaded 'ex' conversation well, I think.

Aw the bunny- I always wondered where that little thing hopped away to. Oh, and I thought the smut in the previous chapters was perfect.

Very lovely.

Nicely done thus far. Trust is an overrated word- I agree. I'm enjoying the heart to heart between Sydney and Parker and already looking forward to clicking over to the next chapter. Great job.

Loving this. Glad you updated! The relaunch has me reading fics again. May even dabble in writing again. This story is really interesting!

ohhhhhhh wowowowowowo! you know i was waiting so longingly for this. I live and read in the moment and don't think much past it. So i didn't see this coming, but it's the best outcome of their relationship of course. and sincerily hope that it doesn't stop. I love thier conversation, jarod's fears and the way you let us know how overwhelmed and happy he is by becoming a father. The way you only let Miss Parker speak is geniusly written, also because there's so much between the lines.  i love how you shape their characeters, is't pure beauty. I'm soo looking forward to your next chapter. but be assured: I'm patient as always and love to check this site regularily just for fun :). have a good time and take care! salut!

what a turn of events!!! I was off the grid for two weeks again, on vacation without internet, and i loooved to see you updating this one! and i completely understand why you like to write lyle. so devellish, so mean, so opportunistic. he makes the interaction between jarod  and mp even more beautiful. the way she says "you have no idea" is so wonderful to imagine. she said that line often in the show, but now she has not only that wondeful icy glare, but also a loving fullyness swinging with it. and i loved to imagine jarods surprised reaction. so good!!!! thanks again and again for this chapter and for updating, i'm patiently waiting for numero 12. :) merci, grazie, thanks so much and dankeschön!

oh yeah! this just what i had in mind for them and i love to read it. the scene with broots and syd on the phone was great and also that wonderful sappy conversation at the end here now.. but where is the sex scenen? :) toooo bad you didn't write it because i think you're really good at them! looking very much forwrad to the next chapter, patiently waiting :) yours, lipamo

When i reviewd this chapter for the first time, i wasn't talkiing about this one explecite, and i really have to do that. because it's beauty is enchanting, it's so marvellous. the way you introduce us to parkers story.. when i first read it i kinda prayed that the husband would be jarod, and after read her children's names i was assured. but the way you decribe their relationship and write these kissing scenes.. it just melts my heart, so incredible beautiful, all that feeling goes straight to my heart. this first chapter is really hard to top and now that i've read until chapter 8, it stands in a row of unbelievable great parts of this story. because there are so many chapters when i eather was so touched i nearly cried, or i reached kinda turned on for ice-water :) and all the time wished this should never end :). i know i'm getting delusional, but all i want to say that this is one of the best things i've ever read. i enjoy it soso much. thanks alot.

oh reviewing the fifth chapter i forgot to tell you that i was laughing so hard again when he thanked her and she thought first he referred to the sex. sooo funny.

in this one it's so great how you let them manage their first real fight and her disappointment. wonderfully written, just: wow.

the last part of confessions seemed a little rushed to me, although i completely understand why you avoided dialogues here. it's plenty what they discuss and you still capture their feelings while talking. but i'm a sucker for dialogue, and you're so freakingly good at it.