Reviews For Lighter souls
Title: Prologue : Tears on my windowpane.

I really enjoyed reading this and hope you can write more soon. Your writting was perfect, didn't noticed any grammar problems at all. 

I can't wait to find out what is Lyle talking about and especially why is Parker so upset - apparently because of it . enough for her to seek solace.

Keep it up and don't leave us waiting for too long. 

Reviewer: Vania Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/13 10:54 pm
Title: Prologue : Tears on my windowpane.

I'm with Nath.  I am intrigued and didn't notice poor grammar whatsoever.  Please continue.  

Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/09/13 03:31 am
Title: Prologue : Tears on my windowpane.

Well, I'm intrigued! Like, like, like. Wanna know why the sudden visit, and what Lyle is talking about. Keep going :)

Reviewer: Nath Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/09/13 12:22 am


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