Amazing amazing amazing! You should write for The Pretender and why haven't you talked to Craig and Steve. I would do it! Damn girl. Bring it on Bring more! You flesh these characters like no one else ever has. I need more!
Author's Response:
Thanks, Dark One, for the read and review. Oh, no. I'm not about to pester the creators of the show. Forget. It. You'll get more.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed
[Report This]Date: 27/07/13 07:52 pm
Mirage Mirage Mirage
I'm addicted to your stories
The 'no' made me smile
Bring it on
Author's Response:
Nath, Nath, Nath. I love your reviews. I will bring it. I hope you'll like it. Thanks for reading and revieing.
Reviewer: Nath Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/07/13 08:00 pm
I'm sure it says something about me that I found this chapter totally HOT! I generally prefer it when Miss P is in charge but this showed off Jarod's sociopathic side perfectly.
But is he seriously married to Nia? Don't get me wrong I liked her well enough but I imagine him married to someone very much like MP. Strong willed and gorgeous. At least Nia is better than Zoe.
Another great chapter! I'm looking forward to many more. Thank you as always not only for writing but updating as well! You have kept the Pretender alive for me.
Author's Response:
Haha, well I'm glad you liked it, twisted. He is married to Nia and I think Jarod being Jarod sees Nia as a survivor (the abuse/implied rape) and love is blind- or so they say. Thank you for always reading and reviewing. It's much appreciated.
Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/07/13 04:36 pm
Very nice chapter! You bring Miss Parker and Jarod to life in a way no other fan fiction author has! I love all your stories because you make it seem like the Pretender is still around.
Which now of course it looks like it will be. :-)
Thank you for being so prolific!
Author's Response:
Thank you twisted, for reading and reviewing. I know! When this began, I thought it was a prank. Why would the creators of TP follow little ol me, except to tell me to stop destroying their Pretendverse with my horrible writing of course haha, but then came the video interviews and not even I can deny it anymore. Thank YOU for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/07/13 04:29 pm
Damn Mirage, i love your writing style. It's, it's . . . inspiring. Jeez. do you run a writing school? I wanna write like you!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing, KSPretenderFan. Ha, no, I don't have a writing school. I probably need to attend a writing school though haha; maybe with practice I'll one day be better. Oh no, you do NOT want to write this way. You want to write your way.
Reviewer: KSPretenderFan Signed [Report This]Date: 26/07/13 03:47 pm
