Title: Chapter 1

You already know how much I love this story, but I've missed this before:

"What he saw in her eyes was something he had seen many times before in the eyes of the people he chose to help. And just like every other time, it was Miss Parker's devastated face that came to his mind when he met Lucy's eyes."

this is so wonderful and probable. I'm sure too that Jarod would think about Miss Parker's face when having something to do with traumatized children, it's so like him. 

Author's Response:

Thanks again for the review. And yes, I really think that he sees Parker in every people he helps, and even more when it's children.

Reviewer: missparker87 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/06/14 06:00 pm
Title: Chapter 5

I could read this chapter a hundreds times, and I think I did. The two final scenes at the motel and at Ben's are AWESOME, I love the way they interact now that they're on the run together, it's amazing what you wrote for Parker's emotions after she saw Jarod coming out from the shower!! Really I can see the whole moment in my head so clearly!! Thanks a lot!! 

Author's Response:

Thanks again! (and yes, I keep replying to you both here and on ff.net because you review at both places! :D)

Reviewer: missparker87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/09/13 08:04 am
Title: Chapter 5

Where's the rest?  Where's the baby?  Don't stop here!  :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review! A sequel will come in about two months, I think. It'll answer your questions, I think.

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/07/13 02:53 am

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