Incredible that you're updating this so much. I read this new chapter and realized sex had happened and was like oh wow missed some stuff. The BEST stuff ever. Mirage this is awesome and just when I thought Forces of Nature would be my favorite story ever you knocked it out with Circles of Hell and Nemesis. Now this one might be the best. I love that I can't choose and want more from you. Crazy right? More of this please? it's pretender perfect.

Ahhh Mirage. You can write them so perfect together and Jarod so tender with Parker. I wish you would do it more often. Miss Parker would be dismissive of Jarod's concern being who she is and what she has become. You kept her stoic, cynical and humourous just as I remember from my dvds. I love how in character they are even this is dark. You're shining a light on human trafficking and possible serial killings plus genocide of an entire country and it is dark.

She and Jarod always seemed like opposite sides of the same coin to me but I'm rethinking that now. Here she's darker than him but with her training would be darker and need to go ahead and take out the garbage. No chance of repeat offending that way. Miss Parker has always kicked ass and this Miss Parker is what the world needs right now. I see that this isn't marked completed so I hold out hoping there will be a happy ending for Jarod and Parker. They deserve it and they love each other. I wanted to mention Rachel's files too.. that was exceptionally written and so FBI profiler-ish lol. You kept her in character too. Guess you're a fan of both shows? Nicely done. I need more. Now.

Wow woman you are an amazing writer. I sit here shocked that Jarod let Parker go and we know how much he's hurting. The wrong/right paradox is similar to Jarod's. He is rightfully conflicted but while Parker is committing crimes she is helping. You surprised me with this one. I can't believe how many people don't know or care about Yemen. Don't leave us hanging.

I know you aren't a Jarod and Parker shipper but OH MY FREAKING GOD! This chapter title is The Missing Piece and the first chapter title is The Missing Piece. I thought Jarod was going to be the hero in A hero's heart and then I thought Kyle but now I see that it's Miss P! She's the one that rescue those girls getting herself in more danger and then being tortured ...i hope not raped.. but yeah, they are traffickers so she probably was if you're being honest.. I love that they made love and I love that she made the first move. Thank you. Thank you. Thanksgiving is early. I'm thankful for you Mirage.

Holy freaking wonderballs I love this Mirage. You are a literary magician and wordsmith. I love this. LOVe that Parker kicks ass. BUt I'm concerned she's dead now. Like Jarod said... she pissed them off.

Please don't let her be dead. And if you could format all of the chapters for all the fics the way you're doing with the new fics and updates.. because the 'centre use only' is kind of freaking things up.

OMG. If Miss Parker is dead I swear to god.... I'm going to read this anyway but I will be really upset. Other than that bit of anxiousness I love this story. It's pretender perfect like everything you share with us and well written and ahhhh I love it. I love it. Your original characters are epic. Takahashi has that weird humor but seems well intentioned. I love the dynamic between Jarod and his mother and that she sits him down when he became smug and angry with her. I think her words helped him see things from her perspective, as a mother. He hasn't always had someone hovering in concern or mothering him. I also like that she didn't really interact with Sydney or Broots.. that was realistic.. except for some unseen scene where she apparently coerces the Centre figures to withhold the full truth from Jarod. It's perfect. All of the blood talk was spot on too.. I can confirm. Thank you for sharing your mad skills with us.

You were missed. It's nice to have you back here again. I am curious. If the stain isn't blood or rust what is it? Lipstick? Amazing descriptive work her and plausible motivation for Eliot to want to protect Jarod. I love the details you inject and your style and writing is top notch as always, Mirage. Until next time...

Thrilling excitement and attention to two things that need it. Human trafficking and the environment and what happens when one gets in the way of the other. I like the way you draw attention without being too overt. Well done. I think of your other story which I'm read and will be reviewing in a moment and then I think of all of your stories and most of them contain serious issues and it seems that you are using Jarod and Miss Parker and these characters we love to make a point. It's not just get fan tongue wagging drooling excitement but there is something deeper. You are educating in a round about way so it won't be dull. Amazing. I should have seen this before. Keep doing what you're doing. I love it.

You really ARE back. Yes. Stay back this time. We need you. I still wish you were writing the official novels though gotta say it Mirage cos no one else comes close.

OMG! I hope Jarod is ok and MP will be ok too. I need more.

Oh Mirage. First, I have to say thank you for that response to my review. I am going to talk to someone, taking your advice. I remember Bush was an awful potus but he didn't brag about raping women and then get elected... or mock a disabled person.. and he wasn't a reality tv star or failed business-con man. I'm not handling this well at all. I don't feel at home in my own home any more. I will keep fighting and... wow thank you for caring enough to tell me what I need to hear. I turned a review into a cry for help counseling session. It really is good therapy to read too tho ...just saying. This chapter like all of them is brilliant. Stay sweet Mirage and keep being you and please keep writing.

Twice in one week!! YES! I Loved this. But oh, is Jarod going to be ok? Where is MP? ahh Don't kill her!