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Title: The Missing Piece (Part II)

Miss Parker tries to lighten the mood. Jarod doesn't seem convinced. I don't blame him. The realization that comes for Jarod when he discovers what we've all known since season one when she shot the envelope instead of him. He WOULD be rotting in a Triumvirate prison if she'd ever really wanted to capture him. It was immersing the way  you took us into that trunk with Miss Parker. We get insight into Jarod's simulations. Stunning work Mirage. The end scene brought a new tear to my eye. No one can stop her. Not even Jarod. I'm glad he laid his soul out to her.

Reviewer: Kyle McLane Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/06/19 02:30 am
Title: The Missing Piece (Part II)

Miss Parker is so proactive and would take charge of her health but Jarod can't help but to want to help her. I don't blame any woman for having an abortion for any reason and especially in cases of rape. I like how bravely and frankly you talk about abortion and about rape... and about everything. Some people don't say what they mean and it makes it hard to understand what is going on in the story. You choose the words and say it plainly and boldy. Jarod's tenderness with her at the end and his tears...oh he hurts so openly and isn't ashamed to show his tears. That's the Jarod I know and love.

Reviewer: Lacy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/05/19 06:32 am
Title: The Missing Piece (Part II)

Incredible that you're updating this so much. I read this new chapter and realized sex had happened and was like oh wow missed some stuff. The BEST stuff ever. Mirage this is awesome and just when I thought Forces of Nature would be my favorite story ever you knocked it out with Circles of Hell and Nemesis. Now this one might be the best. I love that I can't choose and want more from you. Crazy right? More of this please? it's pretender perfect.

Reviewer: Con-O Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/12/18 10:47 pm
Title: The Missing Piece (Part II)

Oh man I'm loving this chapter in particular. Parker is in one of her better moods and the humor is a little dry but spot on for her and the circumstances. Jarod's about to explain that he wasn't intending to have sex and her response was funny and accurate. But she wouldn't be Parker if that mood didn't swing quickly when things take a direction she doesn't choose. But she didn't bite his head off at least and still kept the tone civil. What Jarod did for her makes me love him more. Killing those men was necessary for her survival and he couldn't do anything to hurt her survival. I love that she's the hero of this tale and that she tells him she could terminate her own pregnancy if it had come to that. I know you love MP hell everyone does...or should anyway. They are so in character. I can see them. SEE Them. I know I will never see them in another televisde episode of the Pretender. To see them when I read your work means everything to me. Thank you for sharing and updating regularly.

Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/12/18 01:59 am
Title: The Missing Piece (Part II)

Ahhh Mirage. You can write them so perfect together and Jarod so tender with Parker. I wish you would do it more often. Miss Parker would be dismissive of Jarod's concern being who she is and what she has become. You kept her stoic, cynical and humourous just as I remember from my dvds. I love how in character they are even this is dark. You're shining a light on human trafficking and possible serial killings plus genocide of an entire country and it is dark.

She and Jarod always seemed like opposite sides of the same coin to me but I'm rethinking that now. Here she's darker than him but with her training would be darker and need to go ahead and take out the garbage. No chance of repeat offending that way. Miss Parker has always kicked ass and this Miss Parker is what the world needs right now. I see that this isn't marked completed so I hold out hoping there will be a happy ending for Jarod and Parker. They deserve it and they love each other. I wanted to mention Rachel's files too.. that was exceptionally written and so FBI profiler-ish lol. You kept her in character too. Guess you're a fan of both shows? Nicely done. I need more. Now.

Reviewer: Chloe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/12/18 10:46 pm
Title: The Missing Piece (Part II)

Wow woman you are an amazing writer. I sit here shocked that Jarod let Parker go and we know how much he's hurting. The wrong/right paradox is similar to Jarod's. He is rightfully conflicted but while Parker is committing crimes she is helping. You surprised me with this one. I can't believe how many people don't know or care about Yemen. Don't leave us hanging.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/12/18 07:16 pm
Title: The Missing Piece (Part II)

I need more of this now young lady!! Jarod never really did believe Rachel's prolifing so that is another realistic touch. Plausible all the way. Those final moments were heartwrenching Mirage. Loving this. Keep it going. I need more.

Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/12/18 05:42 pm
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