Welding and you know about forensic sciences. I do too. I work with law enforcement. You get an A. You tied the evidence to the suspects and crime scenes and the stash and back to the victim with a substance that Jarod thought was blood. It explains why Magdelena/Misha was chainsmoking a variety of cigarette brands and that had seen so innocent and harmless aside from cancer and emphysema. I like how you tie St. Anthony and Catherine's religion into this and with Jarod as being lost or trying to find his missing family. You know the show well and are fond of it. I feel the same. You're doing right by the series.
Reviewer: Kyle McLane Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/06/19 02:22 am
Margaret is so likeable and maternal and just omg! Parker gave him her mum's St. Anthony and a flash drive during that limo scene in Scotland. I love you for that. ""I didn't realize you were religious," said Margaret, sheepishly.
"Neither did I," Jarod said, explaining succinctly, "It's from her."
and I love this too
"It's no coincidence that I found you one month after Carthis, Mother. You have Miss Parker to thank for that."
Haltingly, Jarod confessed in a low, clipped tone, "I never did."
Jarod's regret is so real and profound. Oh my heart!
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 06:10 am
Holy freaking wonderballs I love this Mirage. You are a literary magician and wordsmith. I love this. LOVe that Parker kicks ass. BUt I'm concerned she's dead now. Like Jarod said... she pissed them off.
Please don't let her be dead. And if you could format all of the chapters for all the fics the way you're doing with the new fics and updates.. because the 'centre use only' is kind of freaking things up.
Author's Response:
She did piss them off. I've just udpated and I hope you're not entirely displeased. I'll have a look at the format in a moment. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Dark One.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/18 09:03 pm
Another great chapter in this story!
Always a pleasure to have an update!
Thanks as always for keeping Miss Parker and Jarod and company alive and well!
"She kicked their asses" THAT should surprise nobody about Miss Parker!
I can't wait (but sadly have to) to read more!
Author's Response:
Of course Parker is going to kick ass. I'm sorry about the wait. I was certain I'd posted the new chapter on the same day as this one that you're reviewing. It's up now, however. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Twisted.
Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/11/18 01:35 pm
OMG. If Miss Parker is dead I swear to god.... I'm going to read this anyway but I will be really upset. Other than that bit of anxiousness I love this story. It's pretender perfect like everything you share with us and well written and ahhhh I love it. I love it. Your original characters are epic. Takahashi has that weird humor but seems well intentioned. I love the dynamic between Jarod and his mother and that she sits him down when he became smug and angry with her. I think her words helped him see things from her perspective, as a mother. He hasn't always had someone hovering in concern or mothering him. I also like that she didn't really interact with Sydney or Broots.. that was realistic.. except for some unseen scene where she apparently coerces the Centre figures to withhold the full truth from Jarod. It's perfect. All of the blood talk was spot on too.. I can confirm. Thank you for sharing your mad skills with us.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to read and review, Imogen.
Reviewer: Imogen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/11/18 10:32 pm
