The chapter notes tehehee. A lot of minds go there in this fandom. It's so funny. Ok a woman that knows about welding, the uses, the products involved, the dangers. I think I'm in love. I can confirm a smoldering lawn as a consequence of arc cutting. My wife can too. You threw in another twist. Jarod assuring someone he will save someone and then narrating that contrarily Jarod's not doing anything because Jarod is dying. I would pay to read this. I think you need to know how good you are. I've read some of your review responses and chapter notes and you don't seem to get that you are a brilliant author. You are brilliant.
Reviewer: Kyle McLane Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/06/19 02:17 am
Damn. You know about welding too? You make the guy stuff really cool too and fun to read. So much tension between Kirkland and Rachel. Nice. Plausible that Jarod would collapse even hours after the injury. People do that. Leave the hospital and think they're ok and then die. I remember being so worried that you'd kill him off. lol.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 06:01 am
Hello from Itlay! (sorry for my bad english^^)
I love this story and love little Miss Parker! Awww!
So... I'm very curios and hope that this story will be continued in future! <3
Thanks for this amazing story!
Author's Response:
Hello. Please don't apologize. I understand every word you typed. That said, you're welcome to review in any language with which you're comfortable.
Yes, I will continue this fic.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, Clelia.
Reviewer: Clelia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/10/18 10:21 am
You were missed. It's nice to have you back here again. I am curious. If the stain isn't blood or rust what is it? Lipstick? Amazing descriptive work her and plausible motivation for Eliot to want to protect Jarod. I love the details you inject and your style and writing is top notch as always, Mirage. Until next time...
Author's Response:
Thank you. It's always nice to be here among fandomly.
I've finally answered the what-was-stain question.
Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Michael Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/03/18 03:51 am
"no not that kind of rising" lol! I've missed you so much. It's so good to have you back up here. Keep them coming. Two in a week. I'm envious. Beautiful writing like always. The flow is strong with you.
Author's Response:
Ha. I'm glad you enjoyed that. I will keep the chapters coming. You are not envious. Write something and share; I'll read you and review. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Jen.
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 28/02/18 05:17 am
Thrilling excitement and attention to two things that need it. Human trafficking and the environment and what happens when one gets in the way of the other. I like the way you draw attention without being too overt. Well done. I think of your other story which I'm read and will be reviewing in a moment and then I think of all of your stories and most of them contain serious issues and it seems that you are using Jarod and Miss Parker and these characters we love to make a point. It's not just get fan tongue wagging drooling excitement but there is something deeper. You are educating in a round about way so it won't be dull. Amazing. I should have seen this before. Keep doing what you're doing. I love it.
Author's Response:
I agree that more attention needs be focused on human trafficking and this planet. I think we've dropped the ball on both and will continue to. It is plausible that Parker and Jarod are being used to draw attention to the important issues. I've never exactly contemplated my motives. I'm glad you're liking it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Angela.
Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed [Report This]Date: 24/02/18 08:52 pm
Good to see you up here again. You've been missed terribly so. Wow. You continue to outdo yourself. When I think you can't get better you do it anyway. Excellent story, brilliant storyteller. You're a wordsmith. I'm along for the ride where ever you take us.
Author's Response:
You're rather kind. I don't even know how to respond. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jameason.
Reviewer: Jameason Signed [Report This]Date: 24/02/18 04:07 am
You really ARE back. Yes. Stay back this time. We need you. I still wish you were writing the official novels though gotta say it Mirage cos no one else comes close.
Author's Response:
I do have a real life and responsibilities. Adulting kinda sucks but no one else is going to do it for me. You're kind, Gunner. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 24/02/18 03:17 am
Two story updates in less than a week and they are both super amazing! Thank you. Mirage you have made my week.
Author's Response:
I'm glad I made your week. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Needlepoint.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 24/02/18 02:18 am
OMG! I hope Jarod is ok and MP will be ok too. I need more.
Author's Response:
It seems that Jarod is okay (as okay as Jarod can ever be and still be Jarod) (bless his heart). I can't spoil the rest, however. You shall have more. Soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing, JarodandParker4ever (I have a sneaking suspicion you're a Parker-Jarod shipper) (just a wild guess).
Reviewer: JarodandParker4ever Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/02/18 09:19 pm
Ahhhhh I could read you all day and night. I have you know? All day and all night. This is so exciting and now I need to know what happens next. Please hurry Mirage.
Author's Response:
I'm hurrying. I apologize for my tardiness. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Imogen.
Reviewer: Imogen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/02/18 03:30 am
Oh Mirage. First, I have to say thank you for that response to my review. I am going to talk to someone, taking your advice. I remember Bush was an awful potus but he didn't brag about raping women and then get elected... or mock a disabled person.. and he wasn't a reality tv star or failed business-con man. I'm not handling this well at all. I don't feel at home in my own home any more. I will keep fighting and... wow thank you for caring enough to tell me what I need to hear. I turned a review into a cry for help counseling session. It really is good therapy to read too tho ...just saying. This chapter like all of them is brilliant. Stay sweet Mirage and keep being you and please keep writing.
Author's Response:
There is a bit of good news now (in recent days); I hope that has lessened some of the anxieties. Regarding the "awful potus": his awfulness isn't nullified simply because someone else is more overtly abominable and imbecilic. We don't wipe a criminal's record clean and release them from prison simply because a more recent criminal has ambled along and is far more violent. We must remember history. It's tragic to see it repeated this way.
Please keep fighting. Continue. ; Always keep fighting. And know that you're not alone. There are groups. There are still decent people (you have to look closely to find them sometimes) in the world. I'm relieved that you've made the decision to take care of your mental health; I'm proud of you, Chloe.
I agree that reading is good therapy. I hear writing is good therapy, too.
Take care of yourself.
Reviewer: Chloe Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/02/18 08:52 pm
God!!! Jarod isn't GONE is he? Did you like just kill Jarod again? I can't wait to read the rest. Exquisite as always and packed with action and some guy stuff.. which is cool. Thanks for writing and always updating.
Author's Response:
What? I've killed Jarod once. ONCE. (thus far haha) Blame those pistachios. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Christoph.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 21/02/18 11:55 pm
Twice in one week!! YES! I Loved this. But oh, is Jarod going to be ok? Where is MP? ahh Don't kill her!
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 21/02/18 08:26 pm
