Your notes. So funny. Little Miss Parker torments so well. I like how the child scolds him for considering violence towards Rachel. Jarod arguing with his delusion is the most Jarod thing ever, calling her Nancy Drew. She returns his jabs calling him Einstein. I was happy to see Jarod take an iniative and handcuff Rachel to the bed so he could leave. Even though I know how this goes it's still able to cause me anxiety that Miss Parker is out there. That's because you write and you write possibly too well if that's possible.
Reviewer: Kyle McLane Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/06/19 02:07 am
Jarod does have it coming I agree. Maybe he'll be nicer next time he sees her. Him calling little miss Parker Nancy Drew was the highlight of this day for me. I remember it from the first time I read this and it never gets old. Little Miss Parker is like a snark explosion in this. I love it. One more thing. Rachel. Wow. What Jarod is so cool. I love the guy for it.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 05:40 am
Oh thank YOU! Please don't stop. I mean like ever. Just keep all the stories going you know. Forever. LOVE Your stories.
Author's Response:
Well, I have to stop eventually. Ha. Thanks, Christoph, for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 27/08/17 01:55 am
Am laughing out loud at your author chapter note at the top. HE DOES HAVE IT COMING. And I love Jarod so... jus sayn.
Great work Mirage and I can tell you put effort and thought into it no matter what you say. These characters POP off the screen in much the same way they do when I POP the Pretender dvds into my player and watch them. Superb writing!
So you told me in email that you had something new planned for fall and that won't be long now. Just reminding you. I know you already have 4 or 5 fics in the works at the same time but I want more! I looked at your stories just now and most of them begin between August and November. Hmmmmmm interesting Mirage.
Author's Response:
He DOES have it coming. I'm glad you can read anything I write and laugh. Okay. I wish I had the time to put effort and thought into anything. I did mention a new story (because apparently I don't have enough of them). Strange. There is something about Autumn. And - what do you know: as of a few moments ago it's Sept. 22 (it's official). Thanks for reading and reviewing, Gunner.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 25/08/17 07:17 pm
Wow. That went fast and was amazing. You're writing like six stories like a boss and I can't even write one at a time without getting blocked. How do you do it?
And they are all high quality Pretender-calibre stories. Mind. Is. Blown. I need more of this in my life! Thank you for giving us Little Miss Parker in Big Miss Parker's absence. I'll take the snark in any form I can get it. So plausible, so well written and in character like they are my The Pretender dvds. Please please don't stop now Mirage.
Author's Response:
Not like a boss, Jen. It's just fan fic. Mm. I've never been blocked. I'm the opposite. The words spill out of my fingers and all over the page. What a mess! And there's a constant stream of ideas. Tell me how you get blocked? I'd like to know. Thank you for reading and reviewing, Jen.
Reviewer: Jen Signed [Report This]Date: 25/08/17 12:45 am
Oh YES! Mirage. This chapter is thrilling, frightening, humorous, enraging, filled with suspence, action, angst, tragedy, and adventure AND heartbreaking and just- god. It's drama at its finest sweetie aww I love it. All in under 2000 words! Wow!
The back and forth between Little Miss Snarker lol and Jarod is perfect. I love it. "Nancy Drew" "Einstien" "Wise Guy" lol. You added just enough of the funny to keep us from losing our minds about missing Parker. Top notch Mirage and all around solid chapter. Thank you for keeping these characters alive (MISS PARKER IS ALIVE AND WILL CONTINUE TO BE RIGHT?). Thank you for staying true to the story.
Author's Response:
Hello, Dark One. Suspence? Mm. Action? Really? I had no idea. I am being punk'd. Yes, Miss Parker is alive (of course). Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]Date: 24/08/17 09:41 pm
LOVE this chapter! It's hilarious. Jarod does deserve to be tormented and who better to torment him then little Miss Parker. I bet they got into loads of trouble when they were younger.
I also LOVE that he handcuffs Rachel to a bed. I never liked her. Either as a potential partner for Jarod nor on the Profiler. When Miss Parker is rescued (or rescues herself more likely) I hope she kicks Rachel's A-!
Thank you for updating this story! And as always thank you for breathing life into the characters. You keep them alive for me which is no small feat!
Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/08/17 07:50 pm
Still haven't gotten my password to work but dear I'm here and I love this story so much and would love to add it to my favs but.. oh well. Anyhoo you wrote Little Miss Parker brilliantly again.. the petulance and precociousness, the snark. It's brilliant. Her "ew you're sleeping with her" had me loling. Sex is gross at that age and Mirage...but then I stopped laughing because I realized something. You show how children feel about sex and then Jarod and Rachel discuss the abductors and "child prostitution" and how children can't legally consent...with Little Miss Parker's "ew" still fresh in the reader's mind... not to belabor the point but to make us feel something to take us back to childhood when we thought "ew" about sex and now to put us in the shoes of children forced into prostitution to show us that no children don't consent to that because it's "ew". It takes my breath away and it hurts me in my soul. Again I wonder why you are here and not on a best seller's list and I'm grateful to you. You did it subtly too and without getting political.
The way Jarod goes off in his mind about setting the record straight on child prostitution...chilll bumps on my skin. I think you are very similar to Jarod in more ways than you want to admit...and so you can't really hate him can you?
The need for justice comes through in every story you write, the way you protect victims, the way you express empathy and sympathy for victims and what you said about calling a fucking spade a spade and I agree with you and with Jarod (peas in a pod you two) it shouldn't be called child prostitution it should be called paying to rape children because that's what the monsters do...and monsters...
I got the word monsters from another of your stories. I don't think I'm reading more into this than there is... so don't go there. You don't have to get defensive or try to avoid answering my Pretender fanmily friend. You don't even have to respond to this.
You have a sweet soul and a kind heart and and a special careful way with words and you probably have to so people who support a certain politician that trafficked beauty contestants and grabs women by the genitals won't be offended by the truth. We forget about politics and think of only the victims. It's magical Mirage.
More please? I hope Jarod finds Parker and the girls alive and well.
Reviewer: pretenderoxx Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/08/17 07:25 pm
