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Title: Gone (Part II)

The talk of possible conspiracy is always exciting. Immediately I like Kirkland. I like his saving Miss Parker from the office coffee. I like that he worries because he recognizes something in her, probably the hero in her after that fight with the abusive mother. He knows it pose problems. He's right in hindsight. You don't stray from the original series and the characters we know and love and what makes them them and the proof is in this chapter too and this conversation::

"It wasn't your decision to make Jarod."

"You're right.. it was your mother's."

I think Miss Parker reacted appropriately to Jarod's love declaration.

Reviewer: Kyle McLane Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/06/19 01:51 am
Title: Gone (Part II)

Ooh ohhhh! Jarod lied to the parents to make them feel better. OMG. I love that he feels bad about it. if he'd listened to Miss Parker he wouldn't have had to lie so.. maybe next time he'll know better. Your original characters rock! The cop and FBI lingo, just all of it. You're versatile and knowledgeable and you must spend a lot of time researching. This is why I can't write. But that's ok. I'll read you.

Reviewer: Lacy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/05/19 05:01 am
Title: Gone (Part II)

"Until your partner walked in" boom. You always boom out, mic drop.  I love that. It leases an impression and keeps me hungry for more. I never thought I'd live to see the day that something on a fanfic siter would blow my socks off. My socks are off. I like your writing more than anything official. The story, the writing and the characterisations. You really know what you're doing. I'd rather buy a book filled with this work of fiction written by you. Yours is the official to me. Keep writing. Your work is remarkable.



Author's Response:

Hi, John. I wish I knew what I was doing. Sometimes. I'm glad you're liking this. Thanks.

Reviewer: John Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/09/16 03:47 am
Title: Gone (Part II)

Can they have sex soon. Please. Merci. I love your work. You write the characters the way they are suppose to be. I see Michael and Andrea when you write. NO one does it better than you Mirage.

Merci!!



Author's Response:

They? You're referring to Parker and Jarod (and sex?)? We shall see. Thanks, MlleParker.

Reviewer: MlleParker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/16 07:10 pm
Title: Gone (Part II)

Please. Don't. Stop. OMG. Mirage. Anytime you have Jarod as an agent, and in the suit with that blinding white long sleeve shirt and with the sunglasses, girl honey, you know it will be ok with me. And if he needs to be a doctor and you need him in that blinding white lab coat you hate so much... I think you wrote author notes with something about the white lab coat and then with a remark about Leonard Cohen ...l think you were saying the icky white lab coat in the tune of famous blue rain coat? It works. But I like Dr. Jarod. You don't like doctor anyone do you?! Mirage you know you have to see a doctor eventually for something. Gotta check those ovaries and stuff. lol. Come on. Jarod can't be that bad? But you write him as a doctor so well and you get really technical and accurate and man, it's a trip. YOu are A real author. This investigation stuff is perfect. Felt like I was there. The characters are always like I remember them from the dvds when you write them. SO PLEASE KEEP WRITING. LOVE You.



Author's Response:

Okay. Okay. I'm going to toss some cold water on you if you keep this up. It was 'The Dreaded White Lab Coat' (parody perfect). I like doctors well enough. I suppose I like my "ovary and stuff" doctor as much as any woman can like an "ovaries and stuff" doc- she's kind of nice, I guess.  

I'm skipping a space because heaven forbid I include Jarod in such a paragraph (propriety). Jarod's not bad. I didn't say he was bad, did I? I said manipulative and sometimes a liar. I guess I did write him as a doctor. I don't know why I do that. The Muses are conspiring against me. I'm glad you're liking this. Thanks, Contessa.

Reviewer: Contessa Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/09/16 03:13 am
Title: Gone (Part II)

How much do I love this Mirage let me count the wayzz. Jarod telling her he'd take her word for it. YES. Scored big there. Parker later slapping Jarod...it's because I know she has feelings too and he hurt them once already when he left...Right? Kirkland...what can I say Mirage? You create the best characters ever and evolve and grow the ones I know and love. More please with a cherry on top for you. I love this. You prove again that you rule the fandom. You know these characters better than anyone...maybe their own creators if you don't mind my saying so... please update soon.



Author's Response:

That was odd. I'm glad Jarod trusts her- the Muses did something nice for a change. I think you're correct. She was hurt. She attacked. Thanks for the r and r, Gunner. 

 

Reviewer: Gunner Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/09/16 09:58 pm
Title: Gone (Part II)

MORE. Please. Freaking amazing Mirage. You have captured the essence of the show and the characters. I love your style.



Author's Response:

Hi, Jen. I'm working on it (no, I'm not; I'm reading a Nelson Algren novel). Thanks for the R & R.

Reviewer: Jen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/16 10:10 pm
Title: Gone (Part II)

Dont stop now. I was hanging on every word and in love with Agent Jarod. I cant help but imagine him in white shirt and black jacket with those sun glasses all dressed up and fine looking. Miss Parker is so bad ass when you write her. Its just like its supposed to be on the tv show. My dvds dont lie.  Keep going on with it! Im impressed as hell with what you do. Liked and shared you on facebook and tweeted and faved you on twitter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and the review, Leslie.

Reviewer: Leslie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/16 09:40 pm
Title: Gone (Part II)

A very poignant update. Cleverly written. The slap was painful, for them both. There is a great deal of tension and many unsaid words. They don't have the opportunity to resolve anything here, just as they didn't during the series. I know you will eventually get it resolved. One thing I've learned is that you finish your stories and I trust you will finish this. I hope Kirkland is someone they can trust. He seems to be and I like him. I see Jarod got a dig on her with his snarky "this is her baseline" but to be honest I'm glad that he didn't say anything worse. He does have a tendency to be a bully in some ways. I got curious after reading you and rewatched the series. He is an asshole sometimes to her. She's a handful too and maybe he's trying to do the right thing but there were times, I agree with you, during the series that his methods could have used more tact and kindness. I'm sure if he'd known she was going to be important to his world and he was going to want her the way he did in Carthis he would have been much kinder. I look forward to the next update and I hope you'll have time to update your other fiction. Until next time Mirage.

Reviewer: Michael Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/16 03:17 pm
Title: Gone (Part II)

I don't know how you do it. I'm glad you do it. I don't know what I'd do without these stories. One things for sure you know how to write. I think Miss Parker is really hurting but is held back by her pride and her father's warnings about Jarod. Those two need to get in bed soon and work some things out. Please make it happen. Love your work. You are an awesome girl.

Reviewer: Con-O Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/16 02:36 am
Title: Gone (Part II)

Well well well we meet again lol. I love this story. Great chapter and I had to read the entire story again but I know you have real life and can't help the time between updates plus you are writing what like 5 stories. So I get it. That doesn't mean I like it. But I do love your writing. You do it best. I've read all the stories, all the books. You're the one I can read again and again. and will have to because you've done gone and gotten yourself busy. lol. I wait for more impatiently. Hurry hurry.

Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/16 01:05 am
Title: Gone (Part II)

LOVE your writing. You're a brilliant storyteller and author. The way you write...seriously Mirage you blow me away and I'm an avid reader so that means something. Trust me. You're a fine author. This is the Miss Parker I know and love dearly.. "don't ever pretend with me" Yeah, that's her. Totally. But she knows he's not pretending. She knows he hurt her deeply with the truth in the past and never pretended with her. He's revealed all of his emotions to her. She slapped him because she can't deal with the truth. She's probably afraid of her own feelings. I think she when she hit him and kissed him in the lodge after he came back it means she has feelings for him too and if she grieved him...either way I think it hurt that he went away without saying why or goodbye. I love the double and possibly triple ...and maybe more meanings in the chapter title. Gone. She is gone from him in this and his trust in Rachel is gone and those little girls are still gone. I think the FBI wants them dead. Please don't let them die. You write these characters amazingly well, better than the novels and you story is in line with the story from the tv series which is what I want. Always mature dialog and it all makes sense. Your original characters are a wonderful addition. I still love Olivia from Nemesis and Zina from Darkness Falling. I want to know more about Dante. Love that she called him Dollfuss lol not a well known dictator anymore. A very in character Miss Parker and Jarod. You know them better than anyone. Just more please. Keep going and going.

Reviewer: Christoph Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/09/16 07:10 pm
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