Thanks for not having a cat fight. These are mature woman. I'm a man and believe me, we're not worth fighting over and something, Mirage, tells me that you know that already. Miss Parker is in so much pain.. we can tell by the proportion of anger she reveals. Miss Parker likes animals well done. Tehehee. That's our Miss Parker all right. Salty. But we love her.
Reviewer: Kyle McLane Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/06/19 12:54 am
Thanks for keeping it mature. Miss Parker doesn't fight for a man. She'd find another man instead. This chapter exemplifies Miss Parker. I'm not the biggest fan of Rachel but I can see this. Still loving me some Kyle.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 04:08 am
oh damn you brought rachel into it. although i realy like her character amd i think she is good for jarod. but first and foremost i root for our starcrossed pair to finally be un-starcrossed. they only have to really tell each other what they feel i guess. and for that happening.. i am stoked to see how you make it happen..
Reviewer: lipamo Signed [Report This]Date: 03/07/17 05:44 pm
I'm so excited! Two story updates in as many weeks and both are amazing. Your writing is eloquent and profound and as a Science major I particularly love love love love love the Kyle and cloning parts. That heart would have been medical waste when Jarod landed the helocopter at the hospital. Keeping the organ viable is key to a successful transplant. You know how these things work and you know how to explain them to readers who might not care for Science. Thanks for doing right by the characters too. "Tomato Tomahto", "he won't be if he touches me" and "I like animals medium rare" is such a Miss Parker thing to say too, the two that most stood out. You are the reason I keep coming back here. I hope you will post more soon and you can bet I will wait impatiently after the way you built up that ending. Wow Mirage.
Author's Response:
Thanks Con-O. You're too sweet. I don't want to be a major disappointment but I have to be honest: I hated Science as a child once I was past the soloar systems and until I began smuggling anatomy and biology texts from the school library. I wanted to learn what I wanted to learn when I wanted to learn and where I wanted to learn; hint: not at school. Please don't consider me any sort of authority on matters of Science or on anything else for that matter. I'm glad you're liking this. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Con-O Signed [Report This]Date: 21/07/15 03:25 am
Very emotional chapter. Your plotting and writing is amazing but the way you write the characters and flesh them out is my favorite thing about you I feel like I'm home and watching an episode. I want you to know that you inspired me to write. My story is almost done. Thank you for your contributions Mirage.
Author's Response:
Aw, well thank you very much, Leslie, for reading and for the lovely review. I look forward to reading and reviewing your story.
Reviewer: Leslie Signed [Report This]Date: 17/07/15 02:07 am
If it wasn't for twitter, I wouldn't know about your updates! I thank the people who share you and I thank you for writing for us. WOW! Mirage the quality of your writing blows me away. It's so smooth and fast. That, your descriptive work, dialog, dead on characterisations and original plottings make you second to none.
Seriously. Your craftmanship is something that every author should aspire to. I hope you typing up more...scribbling it or whatever you want to call it. You are master of the craft Mirage...or Mistress of the craft if you are a woman.
Author's Response:
Twitter. What a nightmare. I'm glad you like this, Miss Parkere, and I thank you for reading and for the lovely review. I am a woman by the way.
Reviewer: Miss Parkere Signed [Report This]Date: 16/07/15 04:42 am
Forgive me for not logging in! Uhhhhh Mirage you never disappoint do you?
Getting his rocks off"....now I can just hear Miss Parker saying that. I wonder if you use that term too? Say it with all of your crowd of friends don't you?
If Jarod didn't correct her that means it's not about to be over? She's not going to be done with him yet? OMG Mirage. I can't wait to find out what your Lady Muse is stirring up for us next! More please?
Author's Response:
Oh, don't worry about not logging in. "Crowd of friends"—haha. No, I'm afraid not. There are very few acquaintances, some family (I don't see much of them: it's complicated). There is only one (1) intimate relationship, and yes, I know: childhood sweethearts. You'd think every single fic would end in happily ever after.
No, I don't use that sort of language. I'm strictly an anatomically correct gal. The "F" word flies out of my mouth from time to time (scraped my arm on the rain collection barrel today and "ow fuck" expelled itself from my mouth) but "rocks off" is most certainly a term that one of the potty-mouth Muses is fond of. Shame on them! You are correct. Miss Parker and Jarod aren't going to part ways for a while yet haha. I feel so sorry for Miss Parker. You shall have more. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Contessa.
[Report This]Date: 15/07/15 09:05 pm
Whoa that is tense Mirage. Somethings gotta give here and please don't leave this tension so wild for too long. Miss P is going to snap. What you did here with Ethan and Miss P regarding Jarod is amazing and I agree with both Miss P and Ethan:
"He was occasionally assertive, he possessed panache in spades, and Ethan could understand how Jarod's passion could easily be misinterpreted. He believed that Jarod had employed canny restraint, and had answered the Centre's gratuitous violence—and innumerable atrocities—with passivity, tact. Jarod had taken great measures to ensure that neither Parker nor her pursuit team were incarcerated. "I'm sure that was never Jarod's intention."
That is truth. Jarod is all of those things and he is everything Parker thinks he is too. You don't give your opinion at all I see. Are you still no shipper? You still don't like Jarod?
Anyway LOVE this story. Thanks for updating. You are the best.
Author's Response:
Something will give, Gunner, I'm just not sure it's going to be what you want it to be. I'm still not a Parker-Jarod shipper (Thomas Gates is still alive, I assure you, and I am going to sail that ship right into the sunset one of these days (at 3AM). I don't hate Jarod. I never hated Jarod. He's fictional. I'm an indifferent observer. Now that I think about it: I almost like him when he speaks softly to Miss Parker- both instances: "what do you think they said?" (IOTH) and "you'll figure it out, and so will I" (bank). In fact, If he'd used that voice more often when speaking to Miss Parker, he might have had a kiss (God forbid) to rub her face in (in addition to her mother's death, her father's wickedness and brother's insanity).
I'm glad you're liking this. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 14/07/15 04:09 am
I thought you had forgotten this. I'm so glad you haven't. Very visual and beautiful but not too description. Miss Parker is always mean to Jarod when someone she loves dies. Extremely well written as always Mirage. Thanks for sharing your genius with us.
Author's Response:
No, I haven't forgotten this. I'm glad you're liking it. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Christoph.
Reviewer: Christoph Signed [Report This]Date: 14/07/15 12:37 am
Color me freaking elated.
Just watched your story! The hour went like a train and I got logged out lol. You have that special quality the best writers have. Be still my heart; my namesake and other characters are written truthfully and fleshly. Bonus points for plausibility and originality. The words and writing are your own and you know how to use them. You wrote a multichapter story that holds my attention for 10 chapters and left me craviing more. WIN! I like the Pretender novels but I dare to say that I like your writing better. I can't believe you don't use a beta. Miss Parker thinks you are lying about that. Which is it his or her? You have to write a bio! Write a bio and then update this story!
Author's Response:
Well thanks, The Miss Parker. Feel free to make inquiries; there is no beta, just my own futilte attempts to correct myself as I type (with an evil word processing program that plots against me). I'm not worhty of beta's time. His or her? Huh?
Oh, no. I cannot, and will not, write a bio.
I will eventually udpate this; I'm trying to rotate the stories out so that no one fic goes ignored for too long. I'm failing miserably. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 13/07/15 11:57 pm
Tension is right! Sexual tension, tension of the furture, tension in voices, tension in looks. You balance everything out extremely well Mirage and you always leavve me dying for more! Your characterizations never fail to wow me! This is how things were on the show, this is how my characters behaved. The way Jarod and Miss Parker will get close and then she always ALWAYS chooses the Centre over him. Perfect! I love love love how Kyle tells Miss Parker it wasn't that funny. He wouldn't like cops so I totally get that and it was really subtle. She barks at Ethan some too and that is really refreshing because Miss Parker doesn't hold back from anyone and she totally expected him to side with her...another disappointment for her. Thank you for keeping it real with responsibility and including Jarod. He wouldn't get off scott free for impersonating FBI, doctors, and all. My day is made. Thank you Mirage!
Reviewer: Angela Penn Signed [Report This]Date: 13/07/15 09:27 pm
