Tehehee your mind woke you up with petuary? It's so funny that Jarod was inspired by Miss Parker's threats to up to terrorizing game with the baddie of the week. That's an episode I would like to see.
Unfinished business. I hope you will finish this. You're on a roll.
Reviewer: Kyle McLane Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 11/06/19 12:51 am
Such a short chapter filled with just the right amount of action and information. I love how Parker and Kyle are playful like children and like adults at the same time. Petuary. Your notes are so funny. I just keep loling.
Reviewer: Lacy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/19 03:46 am
whaaaat is going on!? biti live to be in parker's clueless shoes. her üerspectiveis wonderfully wrong and ehr deveöopement great to see. also how kyle and her were bonding over they common experience with brutality after her defending that little girl... love it.
Reviewer: lipamo Signed [Report This]Date: 03/07/17 05:20 pm
Ooh Ooh! Mirage I love your originality in thinking up plots, quips and those fictional terrorist organisations! You are amazing. This chapter was too short. I was settled in for a long read.
I forgive you. I'll read something else of yours. I hear that Forces of Nature is a twisted 1 so might check it out. Please never stop writing. I'm not sure what I'd do without you.
Author's Response:
I assure you: I am not amazing. Thank you for the rather generous review nonetheless, Chloe. I see that I'm too late to advise you against reading FON. I apologize in advance. Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: Chloe Signed [Report This]Date: 05/12/14 01:36 am
#ThePretenderLives when you write. Mirage this is splendid! Send Lady Muse my best and my thanks! I love your writing style, your innate talent to flesh out the characters and restore them to the Michael and Andrea that I know and love. I will impatiently wait for more. Please put a rush on it.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Needlepoint. The Muse appreciates your kindness as do I.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 04/12/14 01:25 am
This did not come off as rushed as all. It was perfect! Mirage, Mirage. I can't wait to see where you take us next.
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear that, Miss Shannon. I'll be posting more as soon I possibly can. Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Miss Shannon Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/12/14 04:10 am
So, I've avoided reading this for some reason, but I was having Pretender withdrawl and there was your story in the Recent section--with 71! reviews. I figured it must be rather good. So, I read it--all nine chapters. And now I'm on board and eagerly awaiting chapter 10! Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Kelly, for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're liking this fic thus far. It's great to have you on board.
Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/11/14 03:31 am
Petuary I like! Screw the spelling. I don't see the typos and I wouldn't care anyway because your stories are always so brilliant Mirage! The characters are spot on, the dialoge is outstanding and the plot is original! Don't get me started on your eloquent writing style.
MP:"Your bedside manner, Jarod, is execrable." Jarod: "Bedside manner." Jarod repeated neutrally, tasting the word and finding it rather agreeable indeed. "Why, Miss Parker," he intoned salaciously, "I didn't realize that you were so interested in my bedside manner."
WOW! You ARE the best. I need more. Soon. Screw turkey dinner for 35. I want to read more of your stories! Happy Turkey day anyway.
Author's Response:
Oh, God. Dinner for thirty-five? You are the best if you can pull that off.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Contessa.
Reviewer: Contessa Signed [Report This]Date: 27/11/14 04:07 am
