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Title: An Ace in the Hole

The comedic strokes emphasize the gravity sometimes as well as lend some much needed humor. The process seems like an art. If that's true you are Michelangelo.

Jarod is badly hurt. Miss Parker is confused. That is so far a constant picking up where the series left off. I appreciate your respect for the original series. It is the best.

Jarod and Miss Parker are so Jarod and Miss Parker when you write them. I love the following. So telling in their storyline and history.

"She asked. "What am I missing?" "Missing." Jarod repeated with a hearty chuckle. "Miss Parker," He laughed- laughed at her, the bastard, "you are not missing anything." He explained and then smugly clarified: "You know exactly what I want you to know."


"Nothing." She murmured.

"Very good." He nodded. Bastard. How dare he patronize me!

"Good?" She hissed. "How is that good?"

"Come, now, Miss Parker," Jarod admonished gently, "Nothing was enough for you back when it was all your father ever gave you. Nothing was more than enough, in fact. I've watched you cling to nothing, to absolutely nothing, for years. By now, you should be accustomed to it, accustomed to nothing." He fell silent for several moments, and then added, wistfully: "I suppose we should both be."

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Reviewer: Kyle McLane Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/06/19 12:45 am
Title: An Ace in the Hole

Miss Parker being opposed to retreating WHILE wanting to retreat is just the most Miss Parker-est thing ever. I laughed, I was shocked, my mouth dropped open. I have to copy paste this bit of genius dialouge:

She asked. "What am I missing?"

"Missing." Jarod repeated with a hearty chuckle. "Miss Parker," He laughed- laughed at her, the bastard, "you are not missing anything." He explained and then smugly clarified: "You know exactly what I want you to know."

"Nothing." She murmured.

"Very good." He nodded. Bastard. How dare he patronize me!

"Good?" She hissed. "How is that good?"

"Come, now, Miss Parker," Jarod admonished gently, "Nothing was enough for you back when it was all your father ever gave you. Nothing was more than enough, in fact. I've watched you cling to nothing, to absolutely nothing, for years. By now, you should be accustomed to it, accustomed to nothing." He fell silent for several moments, and then added, wistfully: "I suppose we should both be."

Reviewer: Lacy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/05/19 03:12 am
Title: An Ace in the Hole

how can he still fight him? how deeply integrated is this urge to fight her feelings? but i am so stoked to see where you are leading them...

Reviewer: lipamo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/17 04:59 pm
Title: An Ace in the Hole

Nice chapter. This story is interesting but if you are in the mood to update stories how about 'Sweet Dreams'? :-)

I like it when you make Jarod unpredictable it makes stories / chapters all the more interesting! As long as Miss Parker is still tough as nails.

Seeing as how Craig and Steven are unlikely to write an ending to the series [at least anytime soon] maybe you should. I'd be interested in your take on it.

As always I appreciate your writing and even more that you don't leave us hanging unlike so many others.

P.S. Valentines Day would have made the perfect time for a 'Sweet Dreams' chapter! :-)

Author's Response:

This is an older review but I wanted to respond to all reviews and so I shall. The muse would love to write an end and has tried to convince me. We shall see. Thanks, twisted.

Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/02/14 10:57 pm
Title: An Ace in the Hole

Mirage, you're just great as usual.

This is great, I hope you're keeping it updated. And I hope you you're going in the same direction I WISH you're going. =)

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, missparker87.

Reviewer: missparker87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/02/14 05:36 pm
Title: An Ace in the Hole

I can't wait for the next chapter! Great story.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Jay.

Reviewer: Jay Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/02/14 07:01 am
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