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Title: Help

The hi-tech elements and the explanation of the ruse were all brilliant as was Broots's communication with Jarod. The ending though, again... masterfully executed Mirage.

Jarod's nonsexual physical contact with Miss Parker was unexpectedly erotic.

Reviewer: Kyle McLane Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/06/19 12:28 am
Title: Help

Broot's fear is so real but what I like most is that Jarod wanted eyes on Miss Parker and Cox. Devo. I like all the gadgetry and the way Miss Parker and Jarod conspired to make everyone believed she'd sedated him. Lol. I also like Jarod's anger about Miss Parker leaving so soon and not waiting and that he physically grasped her shoulders and turned her to face herself in the mirror. I wish he would have done on that during the series.

So much to love here Mirage. You close these chapters so well that I can't wait to read the next one.

Reviewer: Lacy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/05/19 02:38 am
Title: Help

oooh so good

Reviewer: lipamo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/07/17 05:13 am
Title: Help

Hi that was good can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, Katecats.

Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15/11/13 02:17 am
Title: Help

Yay! Another update to a story and so soon after your other one. This is one of the many things I appreciate about you. You don't leave us hanging! [Except maybe when it comes to 'Sweet Dreams' :-)]

Another wonderfully descriptive chapter. You truly have a gift of fleshing out charecters that we think we already know making them better. I am always left wanting to know more!

Thanks as always for both writing and updating.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for all of the lovely reviews, Twisted.

Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/11/13 07:42 pm
Title: Help

Oh Mirage, I'm so glad you're still updating this fiction. This is by far my fave among yours. I love it. Even if I can't possibily imagine how could Kyle be alive.

Oh, and I'm sorry about the 'lie' MP told J about her name. I've always thought that secret (THEIR secret) was something that bonded them even more. It's sad to know it's a lie, here.

This line was GREAT:
"You interrupted my date for this." Parker accused flatly, her voice liquid, anguished. "To proselytize." She tacked on in wide-eyed disbelief.

Great job, Mirage, please go on!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and for the lovely review, MissParker87. I hope you are enjoying.

Reviewer: missparker87 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/11/13 11:15 am
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