Good thing MP finally escape those thugs with Jarod. Hope they find the mole.
Reviewer: b18 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/05/12 06:42 am
Love the premise of your story. Please write more!
Reviewer: KS_Pretender Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/05/12 05:42 pm
I finally found some time (courtesy of insomnia) to read and review this. I wanted to read this fic when I updated but I was swamped with insane RL stuff. I want you to know that I was not ignoring.
So! I'm loving it thus far. It's very fast paced. And I really like fast paced fics. You've given us the right amount of detail and it gives the story and the transitions between chapters a nice, very smooth flow.
Also, I think your Jarod is rather like-able. And any time Parker gets to hit Jarod (and in the face no less)- well, that is ALWAYS a plus.
And bonus points when she actually draws blood. In fact, you can have her hit him several more times if you want, haha.
On a more serious note: Don't stop here. The story is intriguing. A mole leaking info, Parker an Agent and Jarod taking an active role in bringing her back, etc..
I'm looking forward to reading the upcoming chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and really appreciate nice review... :)
Completely agree on part where Parker has a chance to smack Jarod (wink)... considering all the taunting, teasing, half truths and withdrawal of information...
Will try to keep up !
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 08/05/12 09:33 am
hello , interesting story . i want to know what happened next .
Author's Response:
I'm happy you like it!
Here is the latest chapter... Hope you will enjoy it :)
Reviewer: preity Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/04/12 06:54 pm
So far, I like the story and I think it is a good start. Its nice to see people still adding stories. A few typos and spelling issues but, all in all, a great effort. I can't wait to see where you take this. Keep it up.
Reviewer: itsallpretend Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/04/12 07:56 pm