uh huh the way he shouts that he isnt raines but keeps being cruel like raines and her line if the horns fit it is all pretender perfection and i need more of this but i want to thank you for all youve given already so thank youReviewer: pretenderoxx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/05/20 04:17 am
his flattery will get you line gets me so blushy that man and the way you write him its all so believable and i like that he calls her m because everyone in the fandom thinks her first name begins with a m so that's perfect.Reviewer: pretenderoxx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/05/20 04:06 am
that was the sound of the ice cracking a little so yahay and i love how you write and i cant say it enough.. i was here back at the beginning and i will keep reading forever if i can i love itReviewer: pretenderoxx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/05/20 04:03 am
jarod a drug user i can easily see as there were drugs in the centre and you write it all so amazing and i want more and moreReviewer: pretenderoxx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/05/20 03:57 am
the reversal is amazing and brilliant executed so intriguing!!Reviewer: pretenderoxx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/05/20 03:07 am
oh man you are the masterReviewer: pretenderoxx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/05/20 02:55 am
thomas! yes to thomas every time. thank you!! the scene transition where she's with jarod and then with thomas omg how do you do it? i love it!!Reviewer: pretenderoxx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/05/20 02:40 am
i dont remember ever reading this am blown way awayReviewer: pretenderoxx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/05/20 02:05 am
omg... the pitchfork and horns scare the children. hes so bad in this its a new take and i love it.Reviewer: pretenderoxx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/05/20 01:24 am
i don't remember reading this. i love how she doesn't get away with any thing that jarod got away with and that is why there is comedy here because it's so much more plausible this way and i can hear her frustration no good deed goes unpunished lol. i love this and with jarod chasing her oooooouhh can't wait to see what happensReviewer: pretenderoxx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/05/20 01:16 am
Please continue this. I love it. It's so perfectly in character and I love how it's written to look like so much like the television series but unlike Jarod... Miss Parker doesn't get away with impersonating a doctor and it's more realistic to show her being jailed.Reviewer: Mary Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/12/19 10:23 pm
OMG. Why the HECK did you stop writing this? Why? Why? Why? You put them together in such a perfect way Mirage. And do things that add surreality and strangeness. Whiter Shade of Pale. It freaks me out that those songs play while Jarod and Miss P are together. But that song especially is so odd and so fitting to him here in this story. His eyes are open but may just as well be closed because he's not going to help her and do the right thing. He won't save her. Kills me! But it's beautiful too. Just.... I don't know. There are so many like hidden messages in your writing. You are a freaking GENIUS! I love how gutsy you are. Lotta of Moxie. You have more balls than anyone! Rumor is you're a woman but you got solid metal balls. Please bring this back. Even just 100 words to get me through... I need a fix. Just something. Please. This is my favorite story or tied with Circles of Hell and Forces of Nature at least. Please please. Please!!!Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/12/17 10:16 pm
I'm still waiting for this to be updated...and that will happen soon...?? I hope???? I love how Parker is working as a janitor in a hospital and I just visual those dust motes in the house where Jarod and Sydney were. "I don't Gretal's..." Love that part. Jarod is so twisted. You're still my favorite author!Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/11/15 04:40 am
I'm reading the entire story again lol...I knew I would....thank you for not having Missy dripping with sweetness like Jarod was. I like that it's not a reversal where Missy acts the same way and says the same things that Jarod said (on the original series). You removed all the things that used to piss me off about the show! Missy gets put in jail for medical procedures on a patient...and that is so accurate! Ohhhh Mirage! It would break my icy heart to see Missy always weeping and whinging about her mum and pops (like Jarod the big cry baby did...and he was always so damn sweet on the original series). I'm glad that Jarod is far different that Missy was on the original series. He has a drug habit and he's obsessed with sex and Missy lol...nice touch! I like that he gets all protective when Lyle enters the story so we see there is an element of genuine feeling. The realism in that she can only get work in demeaning jobs is fabulous lol. Jarod is always a doctor, lawyer, and teacher on Steve and Craig's original series and never gets those pretty hands dirty does he? Mirage you are a paragon! Mirage you are also a paradox! Please update this.Reviewer: d_1ie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/08/15 05:43 am
Can I just say that I love Thomas Gates and that you revived him?! He is so good for Missy. I love Jarod more and I want them to have a bunch of sex but Thomas is the normal, sweet and perfect man for Missy to love and marry. Jarod is the scary, makes your pulse race, kind of scares you, forbidden, dangerous, dark badish good guy that you have a lot of sex with ...or .....until "Thomas awakes from his coma"............I read your review responses and chapter notes! I wish you had a bio and a chat forum.Reviewer: d_1ie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/08/15 05:26 am
I want to say this too that this chapter in particular is perfect! Every other first time fic by other authors is all perfect and painless and I'm all like what the hell...because every other author's sex fic with Jarod is he's got a huge, huge really really huge cock and...........BUT if his cock is that huge then guess what? It's not going to be painless the first time a virgin...or even not a virgin...has sex with him! It's can't be both ways. I am just saying! SO YOU GOT IT RIGHT! It does hurt the first time...even the 2nd 3rd sometimes even after years and years of sex and especially if his cock is like really huge! So there. You did it in Circles of Hell too and the blood and all of it. You write these things perfectly and yessss sometimes the cock feels like it bangs the cervix. Shit. It happens. And rape is bad and fucks a person up and you are clear about that in your fics too. So anyway. I was just rereading this again and wanted to comment while it was new on my mind. Yes, it would be painful and she would want to stop and he looked at the sheets and thought it could be worse because the sheets weren't bloody so he didn't successfully enter her...that happens too. Sometimes the body won't let the guy get in and so there is no blood because there was no sex...not really. He didn't actually enter her. He only tried. So you get big points for getting it right. Even a genius doesn't always hit the target he aims at. You nailed it again.
Date: 10/08/15 05:19 am
This is one of favorites of yours Mirage, one of the best stories I've ever read and I've read them all! I do wish you would continue this and ...never finish it. I don't want it to end. This is a stand out work with Jarod chasing and Missy P running and I love that there are a few similarities in the beginning that gives the story a humorous touch in that we feel it's flipside almost and like we stepped into a crazy alt universe..except your dialog is different, and even the setting is different as Missy is on land in but Jarod was on a ship, and she slept outdoors and couldn't get a well paying job lol....as it should be. Running for your life is not as easy even for a genius as Jarod made it look and since 9-11 it's probably even harder. I love how it completely blows the h#ll out of the original series storyline at the beginning of chapter 2 (2nd episode and your 2nd ep is so much better!). I love that Missy goes all over the world not just in America (unlike Jarod who stupidly stays in the US). You really broke the mould! I don't usually follow a fanfic author for so long but you are one that has held my attention! Please, please I beg you to continue this fic.Reviewer: d_1ie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/08/15 05:09 am
This is brilliant!
"Neither." She replied and then added off-handedly. "The devil really does wear Prada."
"Ah, yes." Jarod swept imaginary lint from the sleeve of his anthracite wool suit and then adjusted the silk tie- which, in that moment, Parker hoped he'd use to strangle himself to death with. "I've discovered that the pitchfork and horns tend to scare the children." He smiled.
Best lines ever.Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/14 06:59 am
Oh please, please, update this fic! I love the original dialog and the role reversal and just how fucked up Jarod is which is way beyond more fucked up than Miss Parker ever could be. I love that Miss Parker is bad ass in this whereas Jarod was always knd of a pussy when he was on the run in the craig and steve's universe.. at least until around 2001 when Jarod finally grew some brass. Love the line about little Gretle not leaving breadcumbs and the explained medical procedures. Woman you are a genius!
Hello, Dark one. Thanks. I didn't want this to be just a reversal where the same exact things happen and all the characters play the same exact roles. Miss Parker isn't going to react similarly, isn't going to beg or plead and Sydney didn't give up the mainframe code, Broots is going to acquire some brass, Jarod is going to crumble. Miss Parker is already back inside the Centre and she isn't going to escape half a second later.
All will be revealed when I have the time. I swear to you: I'm not a genius.Reviewer: TheDarkAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/14 06:56 am
YES! All I can say is YES to this gem. You are master of the craft of writing...or should that be mistress? Please update this soon and never stop writing. I will pay you. I'm serious!
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Oh, I don't know. I answer to most anything these days. Ha. You'll pay me? Mm.
Reviewer: Christian Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/07/14 10:36 pm
Hi just read your story it was very good. I hope you write more chapers of your story soon. I like that you have Jarod chaseing Miss Parker. Please please write more I like to know how Parker get out of this.Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/12/13 07:40 am