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Title: Chapter 13

Noooooo! I can't believe you left us hanging like that!

Author's Response:

Aemilius I warned you the muse was feeling sinster LOL....I hope your liked it?....ah well next weekend the next chapter will be up till then the muse will keep you guessing I guess  ;)

Reviewer: Aemilius Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/06/11 11:25 pm
Title: Chapter 12

I just read chapter 12 (didn't have internet for couple of days)

I loved this part: - “You shot me!” he shrieked stunned. “Like I said, the world is changing.” Jarod growled -

I saw chapter 13 was up, moving on to that now.. Thanks so much for the update!
I'm excited to see what your muse came up with this time!

Author's Response:

Thanks Aemilius I have been having internet troubles myself LOL...I have to admit I loved the Jarod and Lyle sceen in his chapter LOL....Hope you enjoy chapter 13 too !!

Reviewer: Aemilius Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/06/11 10:52 pm
Title: Chapter 12

Another great chapter...kept reading holding my breath... Thx !!! This store has great potentioal and I really hope that it woun't stop just after Jarods meeting with Alex...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the wonderful review Cuddles...chapter 13 is now finally up hope you enjoy it as much :)!

Reviewer: Cuddles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/06/11 10:16 pm
Title: Chapter 12

Glad to hear you're feeling better, AG!  Being sick stinks.

I feel Parker's pain (just a tiny bit) - there's nothing worse than feeling like you've gotta pee and can't get to the bathroom!  I always enjoy when we get a 'visual' of what she looks like, it helps remind me of all the physical damage she's endured so far.  Yet how I love that she's still got enough fire to attack Alex like the fighter she is.

And what a sicko Alex is!  I understand why he's not taking advantage of her yet, since clearly he plans on raping/killing her in front of Jarod, but wasn't expecting his actions when she's in the shower.  Way to heighten the 'ick' factor, for us and Parker (but very in character for Alex).

Fascinated to see what happens now that Jarod's on the island!  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for review Jane... Have to say the muse had a nice time with the have to pee factor LOL...Parker is a fighter, she has to be, it's who her father wanted her to be, who he trained her be...but even fighters grow tired ;).

I really wanted the reader to feel Alex's wants here LOL it was totally the muses idea to go ultra sicko with the shower scene LOL...she's been a little dark since i"ve been under the weather LOL. Glad I got the icky factor across reread that scene a dozen times trying to decide if I would leave it but the muse insisted and she usually gets her way :)

Hopefully with Jarod on the island now too the real fun can begin and maybe the muse will allow a few answers as well but I promise nothing for the muse and I don't always follow the same line of thinking... hell when I started this darn story it was only going to be a few chapters LOL... Thanks again for your lovely review. I am always entertained and pleased to hear how you took the chapter!

Reviewer: Jane Q. Doe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/05/11 05:53 am
Title: Chapter 12

Jarod is so close yet so far away. And he still has no idea what the secrets are. And Parker is fighting as hard as she can but I'm not sure how much more she will be able to take. And Jarod is probably very close to crossing the line to dark side and may kill alex but if he does it will only torture him later. Anyway keep the chapters coming, it always makes my day better when I see a new chapter posted. Thanks for all your hard work on the story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review Megan and you're right everyone is nearing their breaking point now, lines are nearly crossed and time is running out.....I am pleased you are enjoying the ride though :). I hope I can continue to entertain you...I love hearing what the readers think so thank you for the review it means alot....I appricate that you are still on the journey with me :)

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/05/11 04:50 pm
Title: Chapter 12

Now that was worth waiting for! A LITTLE dark and sinister? I got a little scared when you missed your weekly update [especially since Mirage is done with her two stories leaving you the only active author]. I hope this update means you are feeling better.

Anyway, WOW. What a great chapter. I so wanted Jarod to kill Lyle but I'm glad you had Sydney stop him. Jarod can now save all his rage for Alex! Who is such a sadistic little bastard he makes Lyle look like a choir boy. Your story never wanes, it is so suspenseful it always keeps my interest. 

I'm dying already for Chapter Thirteen [a lucky or unlucky number in this case?]! Someone [Alex, Jarod, Miss Parker] HAS to be reaching their breaking point! Part of your gift as a writer [and why YOU should write the ending to the series!] is making your reader feel every emotion. So I felt Miss Parker's helplessness; Alex's desire [UGH!]; Jarod's rage and Sydney's fear.

My favorite chapter so far. Keep up the good work! And thanks for posting!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Twisted for the very kind words... and yes I am feeling a bit better it's a wonder what the right antibiotic can do LOL... It's true Alex does make Lyle look like a choir boy which is terrifying on it' own oh the visual LOL. I am very pleased that I have been able to keep your interst and I always love to hear what your thinking...I myself love suspense so I have tried to keep it included in the story glad to know I am suceeding at least a bit...Chapter 13 is in the works as we speak and I guess it will be up to the reader to decide if it's the lucky one LOL...As always I appreciate your amazing feedback and your faithful reviews and reads....It makes writing so much more enjoyable when you know someone is out there reading it...So thank you!

Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/05/11 12:15 am
Title: Chapter 1

Hope you feel a lot better. This chapter is fantastic, can't wait for the final showdown.



Author's Response:

Awe thank you G18..I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter...I was a little worried about this one LOL...thank you for reading and reviewing it means alot...I am on the road to better as well.

Reviewer: g18 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/05/11 02:54 pm
Title: Chapter 1

still eagerly awaiting chapter 12!!!



Author's Response:

Been down with pnemonia but I promise  chapter 12 will be up on Friday this week! Thanks for reading! I'll try to keep you entertained :)

Reviewer: Kevin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/05/11 06:43 am
Title: Chapter 11

No update?
Still not feeling well? or having trouble with your muse?

Author's Response:

Hey Aemilius sorry about the missed update I have been fighting off a bad bout of pnemonia and unfortunatly have had no engery to do much of anything but sleep. The muse is in tact though and a new chapter will be up this Friday. Promise!

Reviewer: Aemilius Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22/05/11 10:23 am
Title: Chapter 11

What a horrible torment for someone like Jarod (or anyone really) - he tries to do good and help folks, and then has Alex thrust all his deadly failures right in his face.  Alex certainly knows where to hurt them, don't he?

Poor Angelo - you know he's a victim, but it's still awfully spooky!  He really could end up hurting someone when Alex finally goes over the edge...

And I love that even through all of the hell Alex has put her through, Parker's still fighting!  How long has she been his prisoner now?  I think the fisherman said he saw her about a week ago?

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Jane once again Jane. Yes it his horrible for someone like Jarod to have his failures thrown at him but I wanted to show that Alex is clever and although he himself doesn't feel emotion he understand that others do and he knows how to hurt them.

I know I have tortured poor Angelo but I have always thought that his connection to Parker and jarod would be intense, and I wanted to express how dangerous he could be if he empathed the wrong person.

Yep Parker's been captive about a week now but she's a fighter. I have always believed that much like Jarod Parker has the ablity to be a kind of pretender herself....She needs to be tough right now and so she is....

Thanks again for your wonderful reviews I really enjoy reading your thoughts and I appreicate your taking the time to share them!

Reviewer: Jane Q. Doe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/05/11 11:42 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Sorry AG, I'm 2 chapters behind!

Of course it all comes back to the Centre.  If I had to choose, I think I'd rather be frozen than burned.  Parker gets more scars to add to her growing and impressive boo-boo collection.  I'm glad to see Jarod's making some headway...



Author's Response:

LOL no worries Jane, I'm a little behind now too. I agree I'd rather be frozen than burned too. Poor Parker Alex is such a sadist! She has aquired quite the boo-boo collection.

Reviewer: Jane Q. Doe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/05/11 11:34 pm
Title: Chapter 11

Damn! Another exciting chapter! How long can you put off the inevitable Alex and Jarod meeting? It just keeps getting better and better (not to mention darker and darker). Please let Jarod kick Lyle's ass! And please let Miss Parker kick Alex's. It is a very dark story but I can see the light at the end of the tunnel. Well written as usual. Keep up the good work. And again thank you for the regular updates.



Author's Response:

LOL Thanks for your review Twisted and I will tell you this the stage is nearly set for that inevitable meeting. I am glad you are still along for the ride with me and yes it has taken quite a dark turn but I always imaged Alex would have been a very dark and sinister character if he'd gotten to hang around longer LOL.... Just have to say that I think if pushed far enough Jarod could be almost if not just a dark ;) And in the end I think the muse will allow Parker her day maybe not alone but she'll most definatly be a key player...Thanks again for your regular reviews it makes posting worth it :)

Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/05/11 05:32 am
Title: Chapter 11

Yet another great chapter!

I'm very glad that even though you're not feeling very well, you still managed to update the story. Thanks!

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much Aemilius. I am gald you're still along for the ride. Feeling a wee bit better thank heaven LOL

 

Reviewer: Aemilius Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14/05/11 10:55 pm
Title: Chapter 10

its's amazing. i wonder how this all will end up. i love it!



Author's Response:

Awe thank you, Miss Catherine  for the lovely compliment. I am very pleased you are enjoying the story and I hope I can continue to entertain you...thanks again for the review and the encourgement :)

Reviewer: MissCatherine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/05/11 05:41 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Still loving this fic. What can I say, Alex is one crafty sociopath.



Author's Response:

Thank you g18 I am glad you are still enjoying the story and your right alex is one crafty sociopath :)

Reviewer: g18 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/05/11 05:59 am
Title: Chapter 10

You're great writer - the plot is getting so intense, that I'm reading holding my breath. Love the portrait of Parker - always thought the she is the toughest one from them all, but I have to admit I start to wonder are there any limits to her resources... Really hope that the answer is no, but I guess I just have to wait and see... By the way, I bet that she is still able to rescue herself, without the help of BoyWonder...



Author's Response:

Awe Abby thank you so much for the kind words of encouragement. I am glad you find the story suspenseful. I agree Parker has always been the strong one of the group, I'll admit I am pushing her limits and who knows if I"ll break them ;)....I make no promises LOL....but she is a fighter. Thanks again for the lovely words.

Reviewer: Abby Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/05/11 11:08 pm
Title: Chapter 10

My God...Alex totally creaped me out....even I'm not so sure I would like to know what he has in store for Parker... 

altrought I have to admit that I really look forward for next chapter...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review Cuddles! I agree Alex is very creepy and sinster...I am glad you are still enjoying the story inspite of his evil anatics though.:)

 

Reviewer: Cuddles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/05/11 10:56 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Wow !!! Great chapter...

Author's Response: Thanks for the reveiw LiveLink I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing hope I can continue to keep you entertained :)

Reviewer: LiveLink Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/05/11 02:48 pm
Title: Chapter 10

WOW! The best chapter yet. I read it twice already and was absolutely enthralled. You are a great storyteller. You really make people and places come alive. Another Carthis? Too cool. Seriously, you should have been a writer on the show. Hell, why not just write Craig and Steven and offer to write the ending they are obviously never going to.

I love the way you make Jarod and Miss Parker so vibrant. Alex as well although I have less interest in him. I wonder what John's backstory is. I have a feeling you'll let us know in time. Thank you so much for writing! And for being the only author on this site that does so regularly. Can't wait till next week. I'm going to go read Chapter Ten again.....

Kudos to you!!!!



Author's Response: Awe thank you so much Twisted for the kind words of encouragement! I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter, I was so worried about this one so I am really excited you enjoyed it so much! It's your encouragement and wonderful reviews that keep me interested in posting so thank you as well! To be honest this ride wouldn't be the same without all you wonderful readers!!! Thanks again!

Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/05/11 03:42 pm
Title: Chapter 9

alex is really one evil  person.. damn!

i realy like what you have done with the story. the tension is really building,, can't wait for jarod /alex face off..  that would be one good scene.

keep up the good work..

go parker!!!



Author's Response: Thank you Emma! Yes Alex is the epitomy of evil! Thank you so much for the lovely words of encouragement as well. I agree the tension has been building and I think we're nearing the boiling point but I make no promises :P. Thanks again for the review!

Reviewer: emma Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/05/11 01:35 pm
Title: Chapter 9

Alex is amazing in his creepy, murderous awfulness!  Stringing up Mr. Parker - I was having "Silence of the Lambs"  flashes.  Interested to hear what Jarod finds on the notebook and CD... And I'm glad you addressed that someone noticed how often Jarod just 'happens' to find breaks in the case.

Parker is going to need years of therapy after all of this - seeing her father murdered in front of her, physically battered, dragged through every emotional torment of her life, and watching an old friend murderd and incinerated.  I'm torn between wanting to see what else Alex will do, and wanting Jarod to find them quickly!  Although, whatever Alex has planned, I could totally see Parker playing a role in her own rescue.  She's still a fighter!



Author's Response: Alex is a true muderous horrid troll but that's why he's so fun to play with :)...The notebook he found is where he found the pic of Daniel (Alex's little warp way of forming a bond I guess)...I thought it was time some quesitoned how Boy Wonder alwyas ends up saying the day LOL...I agree Parker may need a lifetime of theray after all is said and done but she is a true fighter....but then again I promise nothing...Thank you so much for the lovely reveiw much appreciated.

Reviewer: Jane Q. Doe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/04/11 06:03 pm
Title: Chapter 9

OMG, now I'm really scared for Parker's life...

Author's Response: Fear is a good thing right?

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Date: 30/04/11 09:59 am
Title: Chapter 9

Damn! You're a tease! I thought Jarod was finally going to find Alex and Miss Parker! But, I guess that would be to easy.

Another great chapter. I really admire the way you write Miss Parker and Jarod. He has clearly always been in love with her and I'm beginning to think she with him.

And it was interesting how you brought in Daniel Faulk [that was a really sad episode in the series]. And Thomas although I must admit I never liked him. He was so dull. MP would have been bored to tears if she moved to Oregon with him!

Keep up the good work! And once again thank you for writing. AND for updating weekly and not leaving us hanging! Like Craig and Steven and a few other nameless authors on this site.

Till next week...



Author's Response: thank you so much for your review Twisted and I apologize for the tease but I can promise we are getting closer LOL...I have always believed that Jarod and Miss Parker loved eachother. I always felt there were tiny hints given to  us throughout the series to that fact. I agree that the Daniel Faulk episode was so so sad and lets face it Alex had to use it against him! I agree that I was never a Parker/ Thomas shipper but I do think she cared about him and I do think that being with him was an important step in the right direction for her but I agree she never would have had a happily ever after with him...there was just too much she couldn't share about herself with him! Thak you again for the lovely words of encouragement I will do my very best not to keep you haning  LOL...Till next week:)

Reviewer: twisted Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/04/11 06:07 am
Title: Chapter 8

thank you, thank you, thank you!!!  i was so enthralled by this story that i sat down and didn't stop reading until i had gotten through all eight chapters. i love the way you write and i can't wait to read more. there are so few new pretender stories out there now that i just have to salute you. please keep up the good work and i can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Gosh now you got me all speachless...and that never happens LOL....Thank you so very much for the lovey words of encouragement. You are very kind and I am thrilled you are enjoying the read. A new chapter will be up late friday, early Saturday...Thank you again for the feedback and the lovey words, much appreicated...

Reviewer: sherri Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/04/11 05:33 am
Title: Chapter 8

Every time I think he can't get crueler, he does!  I like that Parker's not totally a basketcase, she's still got some fight left in her, even though Alex is poking at her sorest points. 

I always look forward to more!  :)



Author's Response: Thanks again for reveiwing Jane :). I think Parker will always have some fight left in her, it's in her breeding LOL....Both her parents continued to fight through whatever was thrown at them so I always imagined Parker would be the same...although Alex is crazy and he does what to break her so who knows ;P.... Thank you again I always enjoy knowing what your thinking!

Reviewer: Jane Q. Doe Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/04/11 06:28 am
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