You took a line and did some great exploration with it. I want Miss Parker to be with Jarod but I think she was happy with Thomas. As a smoker trying to quit you got it all right. Good job with the writing and keeping things in structure.Reviewer: The Miss Parker Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/07/15 02:20 am
this was so sweet. he comparison is great. love it.
thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thanks! Am glad u enjoyed it! :-) Reviewer: ParkersCamp Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/10/10 05:04 pm
I really enjoyed the metaphore with cigarets. and of course: "Slowly, piece by piece, until there’s nothing missing anymore." that was soooo good!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot Ivyleaf!! Glad you enjoyed it. :-) Reviewer: Ivyleaf Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/10/10 02:17 pm