Nice third chapter too. The power play between the two women is rather interesting. We all know how "in control" Parker is. Good job, Ice Angel.
Author's Response:
Thanksies again! :-)
Your reviews keep me motivated,for my muse has pretty much left me at the moment. :-(
So I do hope some plot will jump into my brain in the upcoming weeks.
And yep,it's aaaall about control when it comes to MissP. Not sure yet whether I'll want her to put it aside a bit for the girl,or not. Well, wherever the whim of my muse will take me I guess. ;-)
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 26/10/10 06:43 am
And the plot thickens! Nice to read a younger, more carefree version of Miss Parker as well as insights on her life before corporate. You've written the story well thus far and I've no doubt you'll continue to do so. Congrats on a great second installment!
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot Mirage! :-)
It is kinda difficult at times to write a younger version of MissP that has not quite the character ,yet, as we know it, but still has similarities with the Huntress version. But then it's just so much fun to play around with her. :-D
Am glad the difference in her character is a bit noticeable. :-)
Reviewer: Mirage Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/10/10 10:43 pm
Mhm, terrific introduction to Sarai and excellent first chapter. And how cool is Parker on a such a sweet sportsbike.. Nice! I'm looking forward to the next bits already. Don't make us wait too long for it! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks a lot Mirage!!! So glad you enjoyed it (so far,hehe). Yeah, I was actually surprised that I haven't come across another story where MissP rides a motorbike...or that they didn't have it in the show itself. I mean common! Even in her leather pants: still drop-dead-sexy, and sooo MissP. ;-)
Promise I won't keep you waiting for too long. ;-)
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 18/06/10 02:07 am
