Interesting how Miss Parker can sleep with whoever she wants, yet she wanted Lyle to only sleep with her.
Poor Broots- I have a feeling he's going to fall hard for her, and she's just using him to get back at Lyle.
Author's Response: I know, lmao! Always the way huh? And Broots, I looove Broots! But that could quite possibly happen... Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/03/10 07:55 pm
I love that Jarod was able to have a wake up call and escape a lot sooner than in the series. I'm interested to see if things follow a similar path for him on the outside.
Taking lines from the show and inserting them was a nice touch. =)
Author's Response: Hm, I'm trying to keep in close ties with the actual happenings of the show, like taking little parts and making them bigger or putting my own spin on them, but I'm trying to come up with my own original story too. But I hope you enjoy it, and thanks a bunch for reading again! I remembered your review from last time, so I made sure I knew which spelling was right this time! :P Reviewer: Danielle SmileyFace Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/02/10 11:52 pm
Not a big fan of the incest part, but otherwise, I'm very much enjoying this story and looking forward to seeing where it goes in the future! =) It's a different take on the story, but it seems to work. I like how all the children really grew up in the Centre, including Lyle and Miss Parker, but that she's kept a lot of her key personality traits that we all came to love so much.
I love that Catherine Parker and Faith are both still alive. And that new-hire Broots is there.... must've been what he was like when he first started working at the Centre, all enthusiastic and blissfully unaware of the evil of the place... I can totally see him actually being so excited to work in such a high-tech environment! =)
It does drive me nuts that "Centre" is spelled wrong most of the time... that's really the only criticism. =)
Author's Response: Ahh, thanks! No worries, thanks for reading and reviewing, I'm glad of any feedback. And I know, I get really confused with the 'Centre' because they use the English way of spelling it right? But on my subtitles, it has the American way. But it's the English way, I checked. (: Hope you enjoy the rest. Reviewer: DanielleSmiley-Face Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/02/10 07:45 am