love this...please continue, no scrap or edit. perfect. don't won't him to find her right away....love it!
Author's Response: Thanks anonymous! I will continue as long as interest is shown and ok, no edit. And for you, he won't immediately find her. (And when he does, I have no idea what will happen.) Glad you like it. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 26/11/09 05:48 am
loving your story here hope you bring up a another chapter love it
Author's Response:
Hi dragonlady.
I hope to update soon. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: dragonlady Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/11/09 04:37 am
great start --- please write more
Author's Response: Thank you anon!
Date: 24/11/09 02:30 am
Great storyline. I can't wait for continuing storyline chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you so much electricq! Reviewer: electricq Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 24/11/09 01:30 am
WEll written. Great phrasing in the writing. it was a joy to read.
I have always thought a story were Parker leads Jaord on the kind of chase he led her on would be terffic if approached well. You are not following that path, but this plot is great. Full of mystery, What happened to Parker? Why was she injured? who is going to pay, and why are they the Nemeisis? Why/how did the Centre fall?
can't wait to read more. You do more than sketch out the details you involve your characters make them more than a cardboard charater, you humanize them with emotion and dialogue.
I am truly interested in reading more. Your creativity and imagination keeps the storyline moving and certainly my interest is drawn to every line, every word.
Please keep going - I'll be checking daily for more!
thank you for writing -keeping in the fandom and for sharing!
Author's Response:
I was speechless there for a second. Thank you nightowl, so very much. You will get the answers in the coming chapters and more is on the way.
I was afraid I didn't detail enough but your words always give me great relief and encouragement to continue. Now, when are you going to finish your masterpiece? (no pressure) *smiles*
Thanks again for reading and the incredible review.
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/11/09 06:59 pm
I'm so glad that you're back with new story and i'm hooked already!
Author's Response: You are too kind dimana. I hope you stay hooked and continue to let me know what you think. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Date: 23/11/09 06:50 pm
Such an interesting start! You sure know how to catch our attention! Just hope Parker is not going to suffer too much...
Really enjoyed Sydney's reaction and the fact that for once his protection Parker instead of Jarod! Hope to read more soon... (and don't forget to update 'Forces of Nature', and you'll make my day even better!!!!)
Author's Response:
Hi Faith! I'm glad you enjoyed Sydney's reaction and more is coming.
Oh and I just updated 'Forces of Nature' ..
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Faith Parker Signed [Report This]Date: 23/11/09 04:44 pm
An intriguing start! I love the idea of Parker on the run...especially with a hot tattoo :) I do hope you continue this soon!
Absolutely loved: "She's never left you a clue boss. She doesn't want to be caught."
But Janeane wanted it, she wanted to be captured, frisked, cuffed and-
Great work!
Author's Response:
*grins* Janeane and her thoughts (a character in their right)- I'm glad you liked it.
Thank you so much for the lovely review Fe.
Reviewer: fe Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 23/11/09 01:48 pm
Love this! Hope to read the next chapter soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for r & r ! I'll try to have it up soon.
[Report This]Date: 23/11/09 11:24 am
