Hi just read your story it was good.Reviewer: Katescats Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/03/14 01:35 am
Okay, what next? It's like coming in between a story and not knowing the beginning and wondering if there's a sequel after an abrupt end. Interesting plot though.Reviewer: electricq Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/03/10 07:40 pm
Hello Middleman! Sorry I have been absent from reviewing for the past six months (desperate illness of other half!) but I'm happy to say all is now well. It's good to be back!
I really liked this story - so well written - and you have left us with endless scenarios in our imagination.
Sympathetically written but true to character - congratulations on an excellent piece.
Hi Phoebe, it's good to hear from you! I hope your other half is feeling better now. I have been absent from Missing Pieces too, all my Pretender energy was focused on its darker RP cousin Pretender Forsaken...
I always do my best to stay in-character but, in the Pretender universe, it often clashes with my soft spot for happy endings. I promise to keep it firmly under control, for I know that nothing loses readers faster than a pink and easy happy end...
Thank you very very much for taking the time to review, you're a star!!
Date: 15/06/09 08:25 pm
grear written, but what happened to Jarod? New chapter please!
Author's Response: There will be another chapter but I can't tell you when yet. Thanks for taking the time to review! Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/06/09 03:48 pm