I'm not a fan of Valentine's Day, but this story was really funny to read. The Twilght idea was pretty cool, you put J and MP out of the time, because it's a recent movie. So thank you, I loved the final part (Broots and the SMS!) nice job!
Reviewer: missparker87 Signed
[Report This]Date: 03/03/13 01:29 am
Amazing story!
Now I love Valentine's Day! ;-)
THX
God bless you!
Thara
Reviewer: Thara Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/02/09 10:05 pm
I'm going to be honest: you know these characters very well. Most fics involve an author dragging a character into becoming one of the few stereotypes of people they know, but you have a firm grasp on these chracters emotions and motivations.
Now you just need to touch up your delivery. When you say something is wonderful in the narrative, it makes it sound like the story's being told by a character in it. If you can tighten up your grammar and narrative, I'll be looking forward to your future stories.
Reviewer: Dash Nolan Signed [Report This]Date: 13/02/09 08:43 am
As I will pass my valentine's day alone, thanks for this sweet story :D
As for Twilight I have seen it with the idea of Mrs Parker in mind and finally they had great chemistry on screen so it was nice, I'm sure a good movie for a Valentine day ;)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/02/09 09:12 pm
Ehy, I like this story. Good job. Happy Valentine's Day to you too. Bye
Reviewer: loveyoujar Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/02/09 12:57 pm
