This story was brilliant. Good look at the responses to Jarod's (hypothetical) death. I love it.
Author's Response: thanks Haiza, if you liked Funeral Blues you may also like its companion piece, "Undefeated".
Date: 22/06/09 09:14 pm
Sorry for the review that I gave you last time. It was a good story and I liked it. You can delete my last review if you want to.
Author's Response: No, no, I don't want to delete your first review, don't apologize Ann. I am glad you liked the story and thank you for the rating (5 stars, wow!), it's just that I didn't quite know how to respond to your first comment...





Date: 24/12/08 12:43 am
What a beautiful use of an amazing poem!!
Author's Response: Thank you jk! Glad you liked it!
Date: 22/12/08 03:57 am
Miss Parker should have known what being in the Centre was going to be like for Jarod. She shold have known that it would be the death of him, but she was unable, or couldn't think of it. She knew that he hated the Centre and yet she still chased him.
Reviewer: Ann Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/12/08 12:34 am