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Title: What Lies Beneath

Oh my god. It keeps getting better and better and darker and yummier

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Date: 07/03/24 02:23 am
Title: Sleeping With The Enemy ?

So, some people don't realize this is rape and you must have been all frustrated and facepalming because it's rape. Her life is danger and the power dynamics are messed up. Consent isn't consent if saying no can make someoen in even more danger. I love you for addressing this but also highlighting Jarod's darkness. I've always believed he was capable of doing this and was expecting to see it every single season. After stealing that one man's kidney jarod can do any bad thing.

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Date: 07/03/24 01:22 am
Title: Hot Water

Whhhewww! Hot water is right. Hot wonderful water and hot wonderful darkJarod. He's really Jarod. I don't think he's dark Jarod. He's himself. He's always had that darkness. THank you for writing ths and sharing it.

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Date: 07/03/24 01:18 am
Title: Hot Water

Whhhewww! Hot water is right. Hot wonderful water and hot wonderful darkJarod. He's really Jarod. I don't think he's dark Jarod. He's himself. He's always had that darkness. THank you for writing ths and sharing it.

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Date: 07/03/24 12:14 am
Title: A Little Trust

I'm all tingly with the darkJarod feels. This is my dream come true. I thought I was gonna have to write something to make it a reality for me. I'm so thankful you wrote it.

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Date: 06/03/24 11:16 pm
Title: While You Were Sleeping

Have I said before how much I love love love Dark Jarod. The darker the yummier. Thank you for bringing it.

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Date: 06/03/24 10:43 pm
Title: The Downward Spiral

So I was watching Vampire Diaries and I see that they have some of the same chapter titles you have... and your work came before that tv show so.. yeah, I think you're a writer for real aren't you? Not just a fanfic scribbler. Curiouser and curiouser. I love this chapter. I just read all of the way through again and I find you addictive and intelligent. You're a breath of fresh air Mirage.

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Date: 06/03/24 10:42 pm
Title: The Downward Spiral

So I was watching Vampire Diaries and I see that they have some of the same chapter titles you have... and your work came before that tv show so.. yeah, I think you're a writer for real aren't you? Not just a fanfic scribbler. Curiouser and curiouser. I love this chapter. I just read all of the way through again and I find you addictive and intelligent. You're a breath of fresh air Mirage.

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Date: 06/03/24 10:41 pm
Title: The Twilight Zone

See. So charming. It's almost sickening how charming he is pretending to be. The story goes this way. You nail it.

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Date: 14/03/23 02:27 am
Title: Stormfront

Rumor has it that you intended Parker to meet Ethan in that cabin?? True or false? If true then your muse is wicked cruel but I love your muse.

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Date: 14/03/23 02:20 am
Title: Perdition

Yea..yes. this is the ending. I like the first and second endings and they are all plausible but this one is it. It is Jarod and he is persistent. He is a genius and is nuts about family and keeping family together. he loves Parker too. He would do this. Drug her until there are no bad memories and start again. he seems crazy like that and always did ...even back in season 1 he's obviously crazy. I can't believe I was so scared. will try circles of hell next... it's also dark too I'm told. You are brilliant. Thank for staying with this and going to the dark places to write it all out with details. it had to be so hard. you did it,! congratulations.

 

will there be more dark Jarod in the future?? please??!

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Date: 30/08/22 12:57 am
Title: Irreconcilable Differences? (Alternate Ending Two)

uhh my ’ Sydney is so sweet. I like this ending. I like the first one too. 🧐

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Date: 30/08/22 12:50 am
Title: ...In The Abstract (Alternate Ending One)

😮 ohh

 

monstrosity lol no it's not

just scary truths

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Date: 30/08/22 12:48 am
Title: In The Absence Of Light

ohh 😯

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Date: 30/08/22 12:37 am
Title: Eternal Sunshine? (Of The Not-So-Spotless-Mind)

ohhh I love it ohh 😮 wait so you wrote this by the seat of your pants??? like as you posted?? I read the notes so ?? wow! and you succeeded! awesome 😎 you are a genius!!

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Date: 30/08/22 12:11 am
Title: Awakening

can't get enough

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Date: 30/08/22 12:07 am
Title: Chance of Rain

😳 omg

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Date: 29/08/22 11:49 pm
Title: Cacophony

'looking for these" Jarod over here making my guts feel weird again with his being in control badasness and I want more

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Date: 29/08/22 11:28 pm
Title: Coming Clean

he can't let her go ..he should but he wants to fix it and he loves her and she loves him and oh this one really makes a person think deeply

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Date: 29/08/22 11:20 pm
Title: If At First You Don't Succeed

ohh 😮 oh my god he's so much in character being Jarod and she is too trying to be too tough like she can be sometimes and I love them both.

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Date: 29/08/22 11:09 pm
Title: When It All Unravels

uhhhhh my soul and ❤️❤️❤️❤️ why is he so sweet 🧁??? this is not what I thought it was going to be and I love it

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Date: 29/08/22 10:59 pm
Title: None so blind

Margaret with the truth ’ s. and you make me ship Parker and Zoe a little.

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Date: 29/08/22 10:44 pm
Title: The Dance We Do

*BOWS* *BOWS*

oh my gloriful goddesses

!!!

You rule.

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Date: 29/08/22 10:38 pm
Title: Bitter Sweets

looked up 'its impossible " I really like this song. are you a ... perry como??? fan. u aren't old enough to be a fan of his!! it was just a theme for the shop I guess. love it all. wow. can't get enough

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Date: 29/08/22 10:34 pm
Title: Square One

drunkjarod is a sight innt he? I love this story. I was so afraid but I really love it

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Date: 29/08/22 10:30 pm
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