YESSSSS "but she isn't you." OH MY GOD. Oh my god! Best thang EVER!
Thank you!
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/04/25 02:59 am
I'm still hoping for a happy ending. Please I hope it's so!
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 17/04/25 02:57 am
Damn but Parker is so bad ass even when injured. And she is stubborn. So bloody stubborn.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 17/04/25 02:53 am
Peek a boo gown lol. Parker and her colorful snark. IT can't almost be over already. I could read it forever.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 17/04/25 02:50 am
Yay. Ben. Ben is her father. That would redeem Jarod for sending her to Lake Catherine and making her think Ben is her father. We never learn the truth in the series. That's why fanfic exists! YAY!
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 17/04/25 02:47 am
Jarod knew. God. He KNEW. I love it.
I love that Jarod had to PHYSICALLY stop Parker to prevent her from killing Lyle. But what they were going to do to her. I DON'T BLAME PARKER.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 17/04/25 02:44 am
Oh, god. I read the next chapter because I was freaking out and had to know what happened next. Lyle is a bastard. We knew that but yeah, this tracks.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed [Report This]Date: 17/04/25 02:30 am
Oomph! Jarod is always SO Jarod when you write him. JEEEESUUSSS, Mirage.
I love that Parker is trying to save her people. She acts like she doesn't care but they are her people and she will kill for them.
Reviewer: needlepoint Signed
[Report This]Date: 17/04/25 02:25 am
Oh, a multi chapter that I missed? How is that even possible?
Heteropaternal superfecundation? Ooh, gods. Makes sense tho, makes so much sense. So excited for chapter 2.
[Report This]Date: 17/04/25 02:19 am
Ohhh I love it. This might be my favorite! All the sweetness Mirage!
Thank you so much for writing and sharing!
Reviewer: Gunner Signed
[Report This]Date: 14/07/24 06:39 am
The anticipation...even after reading this multiple times is just bananas !
You are THAT good!
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 14/07/24 06:36 am
Miss parker is going to Miss Parker...mmmm uh-ahh I'm loving it!
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 14/07/24 06:34 am
Ooh, I love it. Since my earlier review "The Pussy Grabber" was grazed in the ear lol 😂 breaking news lol. It's so tragic because now they martyr him.
He seems fake, made up, a caricature.....donnie does and he seems also like a Centre baddie ..just fictional and evil. Mocks disabled people, hates on POWs, insults gold star parents, brags that he grabs pussies-rapes women and girls and men and boys, he is a convicted felon, he is guilty of raping E. Jeanne carol, had to pay her, he fucked porn stars, he uses biblical shit like the Bible to make money.... it's surreal and orwelian, he evaded military, cowarded out...but that people still love him. They are so delusional.
People can't be that delusional.
It feels like gaslighting.
It is gaslighting. Right?
Anyway, I love this. I need even more fics. I'm seriously stressed, drinking.
I'm not even in the US
It's just crazy.
He's worse than Nixon!
It's like ...I don't know .. crazy.
You help so much.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed
[Report This]Date: 14/07/24 06:31 am
I can't get enough. Wow, I really love the characterisations and plotting.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 13/07/24 08:23 pm
Ooh so delicious. Lyle is Lyle. Twisted, sick, evil. Beautiful.
I love this!
Reviewer: Gunner Signed
[Report This]Date: 13/07/24 08:21 pm
I thought this would be darker but it's really centre business as usual and you nailed it.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 13/07/24 08:13 pm
Oh my God. I love Parker's snark, she using it to disguise her fears. That's the Parker we love!
Jarod is the Jarod we know and love too. Everyone is in character.
I spent the morning reading this over and I still feel like I'm reading it for the first time. This might be my new favorite.
Reviewer: Gunner Signed [Report This]Date: 13/07/24 08:11 pm
How in the hell did I miss this treasure?!
"I would have killed me long ago." Parker's self awareness here, the beginning stirrings of remorse that follows carthis is telling. I love it.
I love the plausibility, plotting, dialogue, characterisations, all of it.
I love there are more chapters!
[Report This]Date: 13/07/24 08:00 pm
Look at you bringing the happy ending home.. or happyish. I'm glad they didn't have sex. I love smut don't get me wrong but I love this. I see that the readers were pushing this one along. I wonder how many emails you received, so you gave readers what they wanted all along. I think that's sweet of you. I also am glad that you do what you have to do now and let the story write itself. Trying to please everyone must have been hard for you. It sounds impossible to do that. You handled it all with grace and pleasantness. Bless you. Thank you for this beautiful story. It's amazing.
Reviewer: Jana Signed [Report This]Date: 09/02/24 01:01 am
Parker is becoming what she once ridiculed. Minivans. I love that. I always thought she could be taken down a notch from the superior feelings. She didn't mean it. She's really afraid and vulnerable and uses the gun because she's afraid. You capture it all perfectly.
Reviewer: Jana Signed [Report This]Date: 09/02/24 12:58 am
Ohhhh. Parker is so bad ass and still it's a facade. Just like the tv series. I love this story so much. Your writing and style is amazing.
Reviewer: Jana Signed [Report This]Date: 09/02/24 12:57 am
I need more and more. I don't want to finish this because then it will be over. :( I love this so much. It's so exactly what I wanted.
Reviewer: Jana Signed [Report This]Date: 09/02/24 12:55 am
I keep worrying that something bad will happen, something more. I hope Parker will let Jarod love her. On the tv series she is clearly so afraid of him and a relationship with him. That gun always there. When he grabbed her hand in IOTH ni that car at the airport in Scotland she looked so terrified and shook.. and she cried some too. I can't wait!
Reviewer: Jana Signed [Report This]Date: 09/02/24 12:53 am
Ompffffff! Jarod is so ... yummy Jarod. Parker is Parker. I love that I can SEE the characters and what they are doing. Really action packed and fast paced and I love it.
Reviewer: Jana Signed [Report This]Date: 09/02/24 12:51 am
Oompff!
That's all I can say.
Can't get enough.
Reviewer: Jana Signed [Report This]Date: 09/02/24 12:49 am
