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Title: Eighteen

Great part! Please give us some more!

Reviewer: dimana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/03/09 05:49 pm
Title: Seventeen

Terrific! I truly look forward to seeing how you tie up all the threads that have so nicely colored the story.

 Great job. The writing is crisp and strong and the storyline is captivating. 

Keep writing.

 

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/02/09 04:58 am
Title: One

Great story!! thanks a lot! I can't wait to see the next chapter, please update soon...

Reviewer: Coco Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/02/09 04:39 pm
Title: One

Wow this is an awesome story I really like it, even if I'm not a fan of angst I can't help but torture myself, your story is really well written :D

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/02/09 10:03 pm
Title: Sixteen

Another good chatper! I really think it's Marcus but who knows.  I'm glad Jarod came back and Miss Parker sonewhat forgave him but I hope she is ok.  Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Quita Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/02/09 05:50 am
Title: Sixteen

Still my favorite story.

Reviewer: Kelly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/02/09 11:42 pm
Title: Sixteen

Please ,write more!!! This chapter was great!

Reviewer: dimana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/02/09 12:30 pm
Title: Sixteen

Okay, I admit I missed sending a few responses and profusely apologize (real life and all that)....but that was some chapter! Very intense, fun, and well written.

 BUT!! i hate cliff hangers... the kind that leave you blowing in the wind desparately hoping that you can hold on to the rope.  This was one of those type of ch's. You really did a good job of it too!

Please don't make us wait too long. This story is well done and I've looked forward to each chapter. I hope things fall back into some sense of order and I can become the "good reader" that reads everything and responds. Until then please know that I am reading and I am enjoying! 

 

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/02/09 03:15 am
Title: Sixteen

Chapters 15&16 where great! Best chapters as of yet. I hope the next chapters will be as good or even better! Thanks for the update!

Author's Response:

Oh now I am not feeling pressured at all. Just kidding. :-D

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: whisper Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/01/09 05:29 pm
Title: Fifteen

Either Marcus or Jenny but one of them is torturing that little girl. And Jarod needs to hurry back to help figure out this mess and explain why he ran. Darn it Jarod...Miss Parker loves you! Plz update soon!

Reviewer: Quita Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/01/09 06:41 am
Title: Fourteen

Awesome! I thought that this was was going to taper out to one of those cliche "full house" ending, but now you have truly got my attention. Please update soon

Reviewer: Nicola Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/01/09 07:41 am
Title: Fourteen

I can believe that Jarod ran...darn him! But I do understand where he is coming from because he doesn't know how to deal with emotions real well but he better learn lol! Now I don't know about anyone else but Marcus is hiding something. Could he be the killer? IDK but I look forward to another update!

Reviewer: Quita Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 19/01/09 03:12 am
Title: Thirteen

Thanks for the update! I love this story!

Reviewer: Quita Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/12/08 11:14 pm
Title: One

Wow!  I loved this chapter!  Great work ...Keep writing!

Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/12/08 07:27 pm
Title: Twelve

Slap him, kiss him and then make a run for it wearing nothing but a towel. I loved it. 

 

 

Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/12/08 11:16 pm
Title: Twelve

Why do you always choose to stop at the best moment? I want to know what's next!!! loved this chapter, in particular the end, Jarod's try at romantism (how daring he is) , Parker's panic and their kiss!!! of course, i loved the end as weel, with parker leaving still wrapped in a towel!lol want to read more!!! a lot more!

Reviewer: Faith Parker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/12/08 01:47 pm
Title: Twelve

I have enjoyed every word of this story. You presented the characters in a true to form manner, the twist in the mystery ... that I think is still twisting!  and of course the ultimate treasure is the touch of romance and humor. As dark as the show was at times it always had a touch of humor, either in the form of Parker's sacrcasm, Broots' strange friends and comments or Jarod's practical jokes and innocence. 

 A true Pretender story. Thank you for a nice moment after getting a flat tire in the freezing cold you warmed me inside out.

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/12/08 05:33 am
Title: Twelve

I'm glad that they found Amanda and that she was alright but Miss. Parker can't leave now. First I want them to figure out who is behind all of this and secondly, she has to stay to figure out what is going on between her and Jarod.  That kiss was soooo Parker!

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Quita Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15/12/08 04:43 am
Title: Eleven

This is a wonderful story - I love the complicated inter-action between Jarod and Miss P - absolutely great!!!!!

Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/11/08 08:45 pm
Title: Eleven

Very well written, nice mixture of suspense, mystery and characer interaction... but I hate cliffhangers! and you have quite the cliff hanger at the end of this chapter.

As I swing in the wind, I'll look forward to your next chapter. Just don't let me "hanging" for long please. 

 

Reviewer: nightowl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/11/08 07:45 pm
Title: Eleven

I hope the girl isn't dead. Some minor mechanical errors, but the rest is fine. Awaiting another chapter!

Reviewer: anamchara Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16/11/08 11:09 pm
Title: Eleven

Oh I love this story! I hope you update soon!

Reviewer: Quita Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/11/08 10:38 pm
Title: Ten

ooow I so love your cliffhangers after every chapter! I kinda saw this one coming though. Please don't make me wait as long as for this chapter!
xxx

Reviewer: LS Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/10/08 10:44 pm
Title: One

Ooooh I like it! I really like the atmosphere of this first chapter, the warmth and intimacy inside the house contrasting with the rolling thunder outside... Impressive how you managed to create a very sexy first scene with a few details, Miss Parker's lips, the vanilla scent, the taste of her wine... I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: middleman Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/10/08 09:11 pm
Title: Two

Loving every line, A new episode playing in my mind.  Great job eminating the character's presonas and speech.

Reviewer: Rob Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/10/08 10:21 am
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