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Title: Chapter 21

Haha, I love how characteristically apprehensive Jarod is with Sam and Parker. Too funny. The excitement continues to build.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/06/11 11:29 pm
Title: Chapter 21

Drugged-up Jarod keeps getting funnier and funnier and Miss Parker is spot-on.

Loved the exchange between Broots and Sydney and Broots' thoughts on Sydney's marksmanship.

But what do you mean you're not going to tell us Alex's secrets? No fair! 



Author's Response:

Thanks Cathy

Telling you Alex' secrets isn't really up to me. Besides he's got one of my characters tied to...well something I am sure, and the other about ready to pee his pants by the mere sight of him. Or maybe the tables are about to turn...hmmm.

- M 

 

 

Reviewer: Cathy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29/07/08 09:12 pm
Title: Chapter 21

I'm still enjoying! please keep writing. I always thought Alex would be a good foil for Jarod. We never found out the secrets that Alex hinted out about why Miss Parker was important to his world. Will we find out now?

The writing continues seamless and well edited together. very impressively done.  The story is well written, nice description.

I'm looking forward to seeing what Alex has up his sleeve, or has Parker already beaten him up?  ;-P 

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, to me Alex always seemed like a nice little plot device as far as getting some answers go. But by the end of the movie he was flung off a building and...well. Although this is tP, got to love the mystery-resurrection factor.

"Will we find out now?" - Good question. 

- M 

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/07/08 07:34 pm
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