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Title: Chapter 20

Uh-oh, another car? Cox? Lyle?  Ooh, I can't wait and ah, Alex, Alex, Alex- so bad but so damn good at it and he was written here with spot on accuracy. Excellent.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/06/11 11:22 pm
Title: Chapter 20

Alex truly is the master of mindgames and both Alex and Emily are very well written.
But what secret is Alex always going on about? Are you going to let us in on it anytime soon? *puppy dog eyes*

And who's been following Sydney and Broots?

Thank god it's almost Tuesday ;)



Author's Response:

Let you in on secrets? Give you answers to questions? *Is shocked* What kind of pretender-writers do you think we are?! Oh no missy, we're staying cannon on this one; No answers (evah!), but if you're real lucky you might get a scene of Jarod eating pez in a cool way every once in a while.

"And who's been following Sydney and Broots?"
Aw man, that's gonna be answered in the next chapter. We're not real pretender-writers after all then *sniffle*...might as well tie up loose strings and make the story make sense now too...*sniffles some more*. What has the world come to?! *dramatic pose*

 

- Manoline

Reviewer: Cathy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28/07/08 09:21 pm
Title: Chapter 20

Arrgh Tuesday is soo not soon enough lol!!

Yet another excellent chapter, with special mention to Manoline's account of a perfectly frazzled Emily and Whashaza's superbly evil mastermind in Alex... though when I think about it, Tinanaz's nesting Jarod was priceless, KatieQ's frustrated Parker bittersweet, Manoline's 'inner Broots' gorgeous as always and TLM's (who's first three sentences were jealous-inducingly perfect) Sydney...

All we need now is an update on Lyle and Cox... 



Author's Response:

Oooh, lots of things I can take credit for here, yay!

No but as far as my cowriters go, I have to agree one hundred percent. Whashaza's creepy creepy Alex and TLM's oh-so-calm psychiatrist certainly brought our "end of the table" to a whole another level, and I remember laughing quite hard when reading the druggy- Jarod posts as well (as reality and fiction mixed a bit I remember muttering quietly to myself "this is bonehead that's gonna get me out of here?!?!" which should say something. Whether it's about Tina's writing abilities or my mental health will be up to you to decide ;) ) something which Katie's Parker balanced out perfectly.

Hmm.... Lyle and Cox you say *can't for the life of her remember what's in next chapter and is to lazy to check*

- Manoline 

Reviewer: jk Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/07/08 03:11 am
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