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Title: Chapter 14

Ooh, smooth, stealthy Parker intercepting the Pretender, nice move and Parker/Lyle pissing contest.

Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/06/11 10:34 pm
Title: Chapter 14

Yet another great chapter. I love the interaction between Lyle and Miss Parker. MP is wonderfully snarky.

Thanks for the update! 



Author's Response:

Oh yes, got to love that snark. And you are very welcome, new chapter coming right up

- Manoline

Reviewer: Cathy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/07/08 05:42 pm
Title: Chapter 14

Yet another beautifully executed chapter!

(Though an extra mention of KatieQ's Miss Parker is certainly warranted in this installment- loved the daddy's porsche and screen actor's guild lines)...

And of course, Whashaza's Mr Lyle and Jacci's Mr Cox were again, written flawlessly... Can't wait for more Broots, Jarod and Sydney though-Sunday just isn't soon enough anymore!



Author's Response:

Aw thanks JK. And I have to agree about Jacci, Katie, and Whashaza... *claps*.

And psst, today is Sunday. Have fun ;)

- Manoline 

Reviewer: _jk_ Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/07/08 03:59 pm
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