Great story construction, plotting, oh, and the descriptive work is excellent. Miss Parker is free to go? Whew. *sighs in relief* - maybe prematurely? Let's see.
Date: 24/06/11 09:55 pm
Great story construction, plotting, oh, and the descriptive work is excellent. Miss Parker is free to go? Whew. *sighs in relief* - maybe prematurely? Let's see.
Reviewer: Mirage Signed [Report This]Date: 24/06/11 09:55 pm
Ingenious on the detachment mechanism of Jarod's when confronted with unwanted stimuli. Dialogue is every bit hilarious between the pretender team and true to character for each.
Reviewer: electricq Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 24/03/10 02:28 am
Just finished chapter 10, and I'd just like to say that the bit about Jarod's room in his mind and his reprogramming of Lyle's reprogramming is brilliant. My favorite part of the whole story so far.
Also I love Sydney's characterization.
Reviewer: Haiza Tyri Signed [Report This]Date: 02/07/09 09:53 pm
I find this sort of hard to read but that's probably 'cause i can't believe my eyes on how good you guys are. I really love this series. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Aw you're too kind. And may I say what a treat it is to have a new person on board Next chapter is up, enjoy - Manoline
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[Report This]Date: 26/06/08 02:15 pm
Another intriguing chapter. Miss Parker's sarcasm is spot on. And for some reason the mayo/ketchup comment really cracked me up ;-)
Is it Saturday yet?
Author's Response: It is now. Thanks again for a lovely review
- Manoline
Reviewer: Cathy Signed [Report This]Date: 25/06/08 06:06 pm
