Oh, wow, you ladies had me at "Broots" haha. Brootsie, Brootsie! It's so like him to believe the leather only made those sounds when he moved and that it must be some Centre secret. Poor guy. I love him! Also love the description of Parker's pent up adrenaline, very nice detail there. Looking forward to see if Jarod is given refuge. Fantastic writing!
Reviewer: Mirage Signed
[Report This]Date: 24/06/11 08:35 pm
Would be great to bring something like this back again. It's a very well thought out story.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/06/11 04:29 am
Wow! How you all managed to write this story with such smooth transitions and fluidity, I will never know. But it is really an interesting plot and I can't wait for more!
I started reading on Thursday and was checking all weekend for the update. So happy to see it today. And it was definitely a great chapter. I hope our lovely threesome will prevail, and soon too, because Jarod really needs them now.
Author's Response:
Yeah, sorry about that. In my defence I have been promtly on time(-ish) until then, just completely slipped my mind. But I am happy to hear you were pleased with the result once in arrived.
As for smooth transitions and such: Thanks a heap for the compliment, we did our best to make it happen, and in some strange way I think being so many writers actually helped fill those gaping plot-holes. I think every writer has a blindspot and it is hard not to, so having someone else to work with can be good to get rid of bad ideas. Although I must admit it got harder further into the story once we had to try to answer some of the questions.
Well, it's great to have new readers here, hope you stick around
- Manoline
Reviewer: Twingirl10 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/06/08 08:08 pm
You guys certainly don't disappoint! The characterizations and imagery just keep on getting better! Another awesome job by all of you!!
Author's Response: Aw, that's so sweet. Thanks a bunch
- Manoline
Reviewer: _jk_ Signed [Report This]Date: 05/06/08 05:12 am
More please!!
Author's Response:
Oh there's plenty where this came from, more you shall have. Thanks for the review
- Manoline
Reviewer: Vash Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/05/08 05:56 pm
I'm really liking this story already. A great collaboration by several of my favorite Pretender fic authors!
Can't wait for Friday.
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks for the lovely review
- Manoline
Reviewer: JeanneB Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/05/08 11:03 pm
Interesting start!!
I'm so happy to read you again whashaza (well not again actually lol)!! But I hope you will "perform" in the next chapter!!
Please tell me that you will finish your stories!! ;)
Author's Response: Heya, great to see your review. Thanks. Am almost done with the next chapt and it's gonna be a nice long one to compensate for the long wait. ;-) Keep on reviewing. Love hearing from you. Reviewer: julia Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 25/05/08 11:16 pm
Interesting concept and great cliffhanger. I'm looking forward to Monday.
Author's Response:
Posting new chapter as we speak, let us know what you think
- Manoline
Reviewer: Cathy Signed [Report This]Date: 24/05/08 10:14 pm
I loved this it has a great cliffhanger and feel i can't wait to read the next part. :)
Author's Response:
Well good, cause it won't be long until the next chapter is up. And then the next one, and then about a billion more. This is a monster of a story (I'm currently coding and deviding into chapters, so trust me I know).
Cliffhanger was the works of my lovely coauthor Tinanaz. Should check her stories out (especially The Centre's Doghouse if you feel like being grossed out, in a humorous way) if you haven't already.
Thanks for the lovely review Maria, hope you stick around for more
- Manoline
Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/05/08 03:30 pm
Great concept guys!! And extra kudos for putting it together so flawlessly!
You've all written so well, I can't really praise you enough... it was a delight to read, the characters all read perfectly, the plot idea was original and intriguing and I'll certainly be hanging out for more.
Awesome job. Thanks.
Author's Response:
I got this really cheesy grin plastered all over my face right now and it's all your fault *grins some more*.
But seriously, thank you so much, that is so sweet. And I promisse I'll post a new chapter really soon.
- Manoline
PS. Look *pokes cowriters* we've got actual readers here ...YAY!
Reviewer: _jk_ Signed [Report This]Date: 23/05/08 12:55 pm
Wonderful job, Sarah. It looks fantastic! I'd almost forgotten how this whole thing started oh so long ago.
Author's Response: Yeah, I know the feeling. It feels like we've been writing this story forever, which in fanfic terms I guess we kind of have. Fun to finally see it up here where it all began
- Manoline
Reviewer: TLM Signed [Report This]Date: 23/05/08 12:19 pm
hey, good one, Sarah. Here I thought you'd only post by the weekend. ;-)
The colors are looking good. And you got the summary right. lol Till later...
Author's Response:
Glad you like the colors *cough* (cause unless you absolutely hate it you're all stuck with them) *cough*. Is the air dry here or is it just me? *g*
And about the summary... yeah, it's not perfect, but at least I managed to make it sound like the title has something to do with the story, which I'm rather proud of it.
- Manoline
Reviewer: whashaza Signed [Report This]Date: 23/05/08 09:53 am
Yay for us and a Double-Yay to you, Sarah, for the awesome job of posting it. *claps hands in appreciation* Yay us indeed *joins in applause* - Manoline
Author's Response:
Date: 23/05/08 05:20 am
Sarah, it looks great, the colours are working nicely and i liked the intro too.
Fabulous work!!!! and yay to all of us for actually completing it.
Author's Response:
Thanks Jacci. And yes, big big yay that we finally got it finished. Now all we've got to do is sit back and reap the fruits of our labor...*waits for praise-filled reviews*
- Manoline
Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]Date: 23/05/08 04:09 am
