I’ve read the 5 chapters and I must say I really like this story. It’s so different. You two did a great job! Although it’s AU it still stays close to reality (to the centre we all know and love fear). Can’t wait to read more.
Author's Response: There is mroe chapters up for you to read, sorry it took so long to post them and to reply to your review, and thank you as well for reviewing :D I am glad you really liked it, we have tried to tie it into the show as much as possible, but it got a little tricky sometimes to match it up. Hope you keep reading and enjoying it Reviewer: Morgan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/08 09:52 pm
That is how I would imagine little Lyle and little Parker to be! Little minitures of the adults but with a touch of the feudal system that Lyle would most definitely enjoy.
Poor Jarod. he really is between a rock and a hard place. This is very inventive and I'm curious as to how you will play it out.
Thanks for sharing this pieced of creative work.
Author's Response: Thanks Nightowl, lol, i am glad you like our little Lyle and little Parker. And since when is Jarod not in between a rock and a hard place? lol. Thanks for th compliments on the inventivness and hope you enjoy the rest. Reviewer: noghtowl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/08 03:03 pm