I can't wait to read the third part. I'm only wondering when he will find out about what has changed ... Will he find out before or after she ... ? ;-)
Reviewer: Thara Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 26/03/08 04:01 am
So will there be a part three?
I hope so
Author's Response:
A much longer part three is in the works.
You see I spoiled it!
Reviewer: Tash Signed [Report This]Date: 24/03/08 04:25 pm
Milkshake and orange juice = baby Pretender by any chance? Hope the chapter title doesnt mean the end of the story, we need more.
Author's Response:
That might be the end of 'this' story but far from the end of the tale
Mmmm A pretender baby would signal more to come wouldn't it? Maybe the author is trying to be sneaky! She IS evil.... wait a moment! That's me!
Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed [Report This]Date: 24/03/08 10:16 am
Lets hope that they can get together more than once a year
No wonder Miss P is always so cranky
Author's Response: Yeah I would be cranky if I got it only once a year! Reviewer: Tash Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/03/08 06:51 pm
I went back and read part 1, this looks like a turn about is fair play part, which I am enjoying. Looking for the next section to see how thing progress! Do the masks come off?
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/03/08 07:37 am
the second is just as good as the first
I look forward to more
Reviewer: Tash Signed [Report This]Date: 23/03/08 03:47 am
