I really liked that indeed. It was sad and sweet at the same time and rather sneaky too.
Author's Response: Aw thanks. Sneakiness is my favorite thing to play with in a story so I'm glad someone else likes it aside from myself :)
Date: 15/03/08 06:05 am
Whow! I really liked it. I liked the idea of the empty coffin, just like her mother, and the promise of the future.
I love the phrase: 'Miss Parker may be dead, .... new life ahead of her.'
I wouldn't mind if you wrote a sequel!
Author's Response: That was actually what started the idea... Miss Parker's funeral and Jarod in full confidence that she wasn't dead, that there wasn't anyone in that coffin at all. But without him actually KNOWING knowing. Reviewer: Morgan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/08 01:59 pm
Wonderful ... For a moment, I almost believed that she was dead ... but just for a second or even less ...
So ... SEQUEL!!!!
Author's Response: Miss Parker will never die! At least that's what I like to think haha. Perhaps a sequel one day, but who knows... not I. Reviewer: Thara Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/03/08 09:02 am
verrry nice. Bitter sweet but beautifully written. Thank you.
Author's Response: Yeah definitely bitter sweet, as the story goes. Thanks, whashaza!
Date: 10/03/08 02:58 am
Oohh - I liked :)
There is no point fighting the muse.. if it wants to not write 27, then it won't.. best to clear the air.
I really enjyoed this..short and sweet.. and something that could always be continued.
Excellent as always!
Author's Response: You're absolutely right. Yeah, I think I'll let it sit for a while and consider continuing it later... maybe when I finish 27... which is about 17 chapters away from being done right now ha ha ha. Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/08 01:40 am
awwww that was bittersweet. i new twist on the old miss-parker-escaping-the-center plot. i love jarod and parker's late night phone convos...they are my favorite. job well done :)
Author's Response: They're pretty much my favorite too. New or not, for some reason it desired to be written.
Date: 09/03/08 11:38 pm