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Title: Chapter 10 - Some Revelation is at Hand (Part 5)

Interesting turn of events. it will be intresting to see which direction the four will travel in, and will it be together as 4, separately in pairs (and in what pairs) or individually.

 

I always hope that Parker will break from the Centre's hold. Will she now? and Sam's role in this is interesting, it adds a bit of spice as to what the out come will be.

 

Looking forward to more!, so please keep writing! Thank you. 

Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22/04/08 06:01 pm
Title: Chapter 10 - Some Revelation is at Hand (Part 5)

I love how you have said that Miss Parker is a weilder, as Sarah is. Are you going to have Miss Parker have control of the witchblade now? I also like the connection between Jarod, Ian, Sarah and Miss Parker. I can't wait for the next chapter! Great job!  And finally, Ian is rebelling against his father. That's a similarity between Ian and Miss Parker, they both have controlling fathers!

Reviewer: anamchara Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/04/08 08:24 pm
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