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Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this was very well written, so insightful, emotional and  such vivid detail and yet so concise. And quite possible. I hope to read more from you!

 Reviewer: Mirage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/01/10 06:59 am
Title: Chapter 1

I have read this before and it still blows me away. You state emotions, reactions and the results in a short but very heart felt way.

I wish you would write more.

Reviewer: mr big Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/09/09 11:26 pm
Title: Chapter 1

this story is perfect! very well written and so realistic. i guess that Jarod did feel just the way you described it in this story. perfect description of feelings!

can't wait to read more from you.

peace! 

 Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/02/08 01:54 am
Title: Chapter 1

I think your writing is getting better with each story. You do insight, or thoughtful stories very well, even if it's not about the Bucky from the series!

I never understood how Jarod was able to leave Parker in the state she was in at the bar.

Also always bugged me that HE sent the for sale sign in. Your story explains in part ...why that may have happened.

Very well done.

 Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/02/08 04:25 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I was lost in the emotions. This episode always made me cry, and at the same time I was angry when Jarod walked away from Parker in the bar. This makes it a little more understandable.

Thanks for giving it enough thought to write it out.

 Reviewer: tess Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/02/08 02:33 pm
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