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Title: Chapter 3

Most probobly the saddest story I ever read. But so well written, really a genius work! Best character portrait! Especially Jarod, there are very few stories, which describe his loneliness etc. Love it! But what do you have against a happy endings :( ??!!! And don't come with that poem!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/05/09 10:53 am
Title: Chapter 3

WOW! this is really really good story. i especially liked this one: "The last thing he felt was her tear splashing on his cheek.". classic! very heart-breaking.

can wait to read more from you. i only hope there won't be any more character dieing, though :o)

peace!



Author's Response: Thanks Jazzy, i am glad you enjoyed it. I liked that line too lol, it was very sad and i was proud of myself lol. have a happy holiday and im glad you enjoyed

Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/12/07 07:17 am
Title: Chapter 3

Considering that you just killed off Jarod you really shouldn't get any chocolates. But I think you earned them anyway with your characterisations and imagery. Very well done!

Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response: Thanks Cathy for the compliemnt on they writing. I'll leave it up to you guys if my muse and myself get chocolates lol. I am glad you like and you are welcome for me sharing. Happy holidays

Reviewer: Cathy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22/12/07 12:12 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Quite a tearjerker (sniffle, sniffle).  Very emotional.  I loved the imagery and symbolism with the snowflakes, and it all tied in very well with the poem.  Where'd you get the poem, btw?  Is it original?

Great writing.  No happy ending, but that's life.  *I'll* send you chocolates;)



Author's Response: Thanks MP! I was aiming to make ppl cry (i cant do sad very well and made two of my betas cry yay, but not the others lol) I am glad you liked the imagery, I am not to bad at doing that sort of writing lol. As for the poem, a huge thanks, it is my own poem and on a site i posted it was nominated for best poem of the week lmao. I am glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: MP Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/12/07 11:14 pm
Title: Chapter 3

This is it?  Well this , this ...sucks!  How could you bring us this far and then kill him off?  I wanted a happy ending.  No chocolate or roses for you and NO PEZ either!

Author's Response: Lol, sorry RaChell, but one of them had to die to tie in with my poem, and it just seemed Jarod fitted better. I cant bring him back to life, he is dead as dead can be so i am afraid this is it lol Thanks for reviewing and i do hope you enjoyed it despite the ending

Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/12/07 09:36 pm
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