Reviews For We All Fall Down
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Title: Chapter 1

Wow you really know how to interrupt perfectly good study time... now there's no way I can get back to the books... too much need to keep reading on... too much to think about...

Loved the plot, especially the family interractions, they just screamed genuine (as heartbreakingly genuine as it gets, but genuine none the less). I certainly knew I never expected Margaret to be the one to break Jarod's heart but after reading it, it just sat right. Afterall, who else could hurt him that baddly after all he's been through?
Your take on things was so original and inspiring! All the characters just flowed and you really have a knack for getting the descriptions to match the mood-loved the sleeping descriptions, you've got siblings down pat!
Thank you (and your beta) for such a great piece of work!
 PLEASE keep it coming -and SOON! (me and my uni degree clearly can't wait!)

 Reviewer: jk Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/04/08 06:47 pm
Title: Chapter 1

good work, this is a great chap Tina! you did a wonderful job

Author's Response: Thanks, Kye, couldn't have done it without your help.

 Reviewer: Onisius Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/07 08:26 pm
Title: Chapter 1

That was sweet, and yay for Jarod, he so totally deserves it.

Ummm, no purple button to press so i assume the pale orange one will have to suffice?




Author's Response:

OK, so I cant tell me colors....

This chapter may be sweet, but dont worry there in no diabetic warning attached to the rest of the story.

 Reviewer: jacci Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/07 07:52 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Author's Response:

Backing the car in that way only seemed (dare I say it?) logical.  Much easier to escape going frontwards instead of backwards.

 OK, at the risk of falling off my chair from laughing, all I can picture from that sentence is Jarod dressed as Spock!  Well it is almost Halloween so why not!  (big grin)  Looking forward to more of course!  



Author's Response: I had the same picture in mind when I wrote the sentence.  Wonder if we are both suffering from a little too much smoke inhalation?

 Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/10/07 06:29 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Very nice!  Love the answer to a 18 point turn re: backing out the car.  (wink, wink)  Nicely done and looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Backing the car in that way only seemed (dare I say it?) logical.  Much easier to escape going frontwards instead of backwards.  More speed from the car that way too.  Chapter 2 is on the way to the beta, so....only 3 more drafts before I can post. 

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/10/07 10:28 pm
Title: Chapter 1

great start. hope to read more soon :o)

peace! 



Author's Response: Glad you like the start, next chapter is up to my muse and my beta.  But hopefully it will be soon.

 Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/10/07 08:09 am
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