thank you for posting more...please don't stop!
Reviewer: loveyoujar Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/02/09 03:42 pm
Good story. Can't wait until you post more. Please post more soon.
Reviewer: Ann Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 13/12/08 08:47 pm
Gah, another unfinished story . . . I'm liking it so far--hope you can post more soon! :D
Author's Response:
Doranwen,
Glad you are enjoying the story. I know how frustrating it is to come across an unfinished story and I hate that mine is one of them. I haven't forgotten about this though and I am slowly but surely working on an update. It's a mixture writer's block and not having the time to do it.
Reviewer: Doranwen Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/10/08 11:46 pm
hey great story can't wait to read more. Now that it's the summer maybe you'll more time to write. hope to read more soon!
Author's Response: Thanks, Janeway. I actually have summer classes, but I have a month before they start, so I am going to try my hardest to get an update or two in before I have to focus on school again. :)
Date: 15/06/08 01:55 am
This is my first time reading this story and I love it!! Don't worry too much about having readers, as I think this plot has and will continue to attract readers. I can't wait for your next post! I really like the development of the characters. To be honest, I was on the verge of not reading the rest because I hated the thought of Miss Parker being dead. Man am I glad I continued reading!! I think its hilarious that Miss Parker decided to become a bounty hunter!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you are enjoying it. No worries, I would never really kill off a character...not Jared or Miss Parker at least. ;) Reviewer: anamchara Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 28/03/08 01:40 pm
I am really enjoying this story and I hope you will update very soon.
You have managed to keep true to the characters and I love the fact that you have reintroduced Mr Parker. Really looking forward to the next episode. Thank you for giving us some excellent writing.
Reviewer: Phoebe Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 26/03/08 09:40 am
Oh yes, Mr. Parker is up for the "Daddy of the year" award!
So, how will Jarod's family react to Miss Parker and the kid? I hope RL lets you get back to updating in the not too distant future.
Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: Cathy Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/08 05:38 am
I am thoroughly enjoying this story, and I'm very curious as to what is up with the reappearance of Mr Parker.
The story moves smoothly and the characters seem to be true to form.
I hope you post a new chapter soon.
Reviewer: nightowl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 23/03/08 09:28 am
I look forward to the next chapter to see just how Jarod's family go with having parker with them
Reviewer: Tash Signed [Report This]Date: 23/03/08 04:57 am
You can't stop writing the wonderful story. Please update soon. ;)
Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/03/08 03:57 am
will you write the sequel? and WHEN?
your story's so good, I can't live without knowing what will happen now!!
Author's Response: Hi, John. Yes, I am going to write the sequel, but I couldn't tell you when exactly. I've been super busy with school lately. I recently graduated from one college and immediately began another, which is why I haven't updated any of my stories. I do apologize for making you wait, but I am glad that you are still interested. I'll try not to make too long until I update. :) Reviewer: john Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 17/01/08 12:46 pm
Please, write the sequel!
Reviewer: John Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/11/07 05:40 pm
I just want everyone to know that I have not abandoned this story. I am going to be graduating college at the end of this semester, which was kind of unexpected, and I have a long thesis to write that has to come first. So thanks to you readers for sticking with me. I'm sorry I have to keep you waiting and I will be getting back to it just as soon as I can. :)
Reviewer: slowly Signed [Report This]Date: 05/10/07 08:41 pm
Okay, I take back what I said about Mr. Parker in my last review. He's still as horrible as always! But I liked the conversation between Miss Parker and her father. Nice twist with her baby brother being in the house.
And in case you hadn't noticed: yes, I'm sill here and am waiting for more ;-)
Author's Response: Thanks, Cathy. :) Reviewer: Cathy Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/09/07 01:20 am
Very nice and interesting! Liked the interaction between Miss Parker and her father. And her little brother being in the kitchen was quite a surprise! Looking forward to the next chapter, good luck with school.
But wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You said "I hope you readers are still out there." Hmm, well it looks like we're still here. (Big Grin!)
Author's Response: Thanks RaChell. I'm glad you're still with me. ;) Reviewer: RaChell Signed
[Report This]Date: 18/09/07 05:48 pm
Good chapter. Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 18/09/07 02:39 am
So glad you were able to write another chapter. :) I know how school can be, barely anytime to breathe. But I love it, Parker, Jarod and baby brother on the run!! This can only get better. Can't wait to get more!!
Twingirl10
Author's Response: Thank you! :) Reviewer: Twingirl10 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/09/07 11:30 pm
Another great chapter. Poor Jarod and Parker - they never seem to get it right do they...!!
Looking forward to the next instalment - don't keep up waiting too long !!
Reviewer: JLC Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/09/07 02:52 pm
The best chapter yet! You really explored the relationship between them in this one and it's great! More, More!
Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]Date: 03/09/07 09:26 pm
They really do know how to hurt each other, don't they? And you manage to make Mr. Parker seem almost likeable.
Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: Cathy Signed [Report This]Date: 02/09/07 03:28 am
I enjoyed this story more than I thought I would after the first chapter you picked up the flow and the characters and the plot seemed to take off.
Wondering where you will go next with this. Keep going.
[Report This]Date: 24/08/07 06:37 pm
Wow - what a great story. Just discovered it and read all the chapters in one go !! What a good cliffhanger too - talk about leave your readers hanging...!!
I know real life is a drag but I hope you are able to update soon.
Reviewer: JLC Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/08/07 05:20 pm
Mr. Parker is still alive? Now that doesn't sound good. I'm curious to see what comes next.
Re. Miss Parker's first name: Wasn't there an episode where we see a Christmas ornament that MP made as a child signed with "M. Parker"? If her first name doesn't start with M, I'd say it's strange to sign anything as a child with anything but the initials of your first name. But then again, I normally don't really care what her first name is ;-)
Anyway, thanks for sharing and I hope school doesn't keep you too far away from this story.
Author's Response: Cathy, you are right about the ornament, but that wasn't convincing enough for me. I think that was just an easy out for the writers so they wouldn't have to reveal a first name. :) Thanks for your reviews. Reviewer: Cathy Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/08/07 11:35 pm
Verrryy Nice! Liked how you threw that glich in there. Curious to see what happens. Good luck with school, don't forget to throw us a bone I mean a chapter or two now and then! You'd feel bad if we suffered irrepairable fan fic deparvation. (wink, wink) Hmm, maybe I should go back to school and take a course in how to spell.
Author's Response: Lol. Thanks, RaChell. My professors seem pretty laid back, so, hopefully, I won't be bogged down by homework all the time. :) Reviewer: RaChell Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/08/07 09:21 pm
