I just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying this. I like the construction of the story going forward with both the beginning & the middle of the story. I especially like how Jarod & Miss P's interaction is (mostly) based on friendship which grows with everyday.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah while I'm a fan of the J/MP stuff, I think it would have to be very gradual for it to be at all realistic. Reviewer: wormie Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/03/08 11:30 pm
Cool!!
I'm so happy to see that you had updated!
Well, it was worthing the wait, but now, you'll have to update very quickly lol I want to know everything about Armenia and Jarod's mother!! And why Jarod say it's gonna end soon? Someone's going to free them?
I always look if you update 'cause your story is one of the longest-standing and one that is worth reading, when you finish the chapter you can't wait to read the sequel and the plot is really good let alone the way you chose to write: past and present it's really exciting!!
So keep going (and fast lol)!!
Author's Response: You have so many sweet things to say. Thank you! You'll know all about Jarod's mother and Armenia soon verrrrrry soon. Well within a few chapters or so anyway haha. Reviewer: Angelina Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 25/02/08 05:05 pm
Argh, I can't believe it's taken me this long to realize there's been an update!
Great chapter as usual, loved the interaction between MP and J and MP and Lyle. But you do realize that you have to give us the next chapter really fast now? I mean you can't give us so many hints about what's still to come and then just leave us hanging. So hurry up already, willya ;-)
Author's Response: You're just going to have to check in more often! Thank you, Cathy. I'll try to kick myself into gear if I can, but don't get too excited or anything :D Reviewer: Cathy Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/02/08 05:36 am
quality writing right there! straight up!
Author's Response: haha wow. You bet, bigballsy! Reviewer: bigballsy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/02/08 12:17 am
Oooh... another fantastic chapter from an amazing writer :) I find our famous duo's attitude at the end very intriguing, and the whole thing with Jarod's mother, and wtf happened in Armernia? So many mysteries! I cannot wait to read more :)
PS - If every time I post, i get another chapter of this.. well i just may find the time to write a bit more frequently ;)
Author's Response:
Why thank you! Yes mysteries galore muahaha.
Um one can only hope that that is true. Don't tease me so! Oh and sorry I lost you online yesterday. My computer had a bit of a tantrum and everything closed out and I was too scared to push its buttons any further.
Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]Date: 20/02/08 10:09 pm
Ohh, very nice, TLM. Start of with the good feeling about Jarod finally talking (well, sorta talking) to his long-long mommy and end with even more questions than before. Great job and write faster, please. You have some of us on pins and needles, here.
Author's Response: Haha good feelings just never last for long do they? Thanks, I will do my best! Reviewer: Tinanaz Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/02/08 04:42 pm
