dun dun dun. new twist yay! sorry so late in reviewing, i was climbing mount everest :) absolutely can not wait to see where this new direction will go!!
Author's Response: I was waiting so patiently. I bet you're excited, I've rambled enough about it.
Date: 04/12/07 12:08 am
Ok, great chapter again!
I'm kind of weirded out reading about Miss Parker "relieving herself" but it goes well towards normalizing her.
I'm very intrigued by the last bit of day 34. "Scrolls" have such interesting conotations.
And I absolutely loved the last sentence in day 7.... Loved it!
Next chapter please. ;-)
Author's Response: It's all in the details. Scrolls can go horribly wrong, but hopefully they won't. Reviewer: Rob Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 26/11/07 09:26 am
Gah! MORE, please?!?!?
*bats eyelashes*
Author's Response: Ummm... okay! Reviewer: Taryn Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 23/11/07 12:48 pm
Very nice! And it's getting so intriquing too, can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Author's Response: Thanks, RaChell. My story can never go on til I get a review from you. ;)
[Report This]Date: 21/11/07 09:51 pm
Yay for a new chap!
What a difference a week makes . . . anyway, great writing (as usual). You characterize Parker verrry well, and the interplay between her and Jarod was priceless!
Congratulations on your epiphany! The best part about fanfic writing (for me at least) is when your own stories manage to surprise you. The scrolls are tough material to work with, but I'm sure you can rise to the challenge. It's remarkably unannoying (I made up a word!) so far.
Again, thanx for some great reading and good luck with future chaps!
Author's Response: You are too kind (and I like your Sydney-like verrrrrry well). This story has definitely surprised me. I started it saying okay this is going to be way more simple than Learning to Run Again was. Not so much. I just can't help myself but to sticky it up. Reviewer: MP Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/11/07 12:26 pm
well the epiphany seems like an excellent one to me! I am most intrigued... Parker's attitude at the 'real time' segment was very well-done, and i like the non-lame way you incorporated the scrolls.
as you were..
Author's Response: Glad you're intrigued. The whole idea is to deal with those scrolls in the most un-lame way possible haha which will be quite the challenge. Now where are your next chapters missy?? Reviewer: KatieQ Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/11/07 07:10 pm
