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Title: Day 5 : Day 32

looks like somebody stole my work!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/06/09 04:06 am
Title: Day 5 : Day 32

This is as good as watching the show! Can't wait for the next installment! Please get your writing hand primed quickly. {:-6

Author's Response:

Well there's just no greater compliment than that! I am in process. I try to prioritize school above the Pretender but sometimes it is just so difficult!

Reviewer: Rob Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/10/07 05:22 pm
Title: Day 5 : Day 32

Well I'm hooked.

Due to unfortunate incidents known as RL I haven't had as much time to read fanfic as I'd like lately, so I haven't had the chance to read the last four chapters of your story until now. It's 1am, and man was it worth it! 

I love the blend between the "before" and "after", but then again I was always a big fan of the flashbacks so it's not really that much of a wonder.

You've got some great one-liners here and there which really make this seem even more like a 'real' pretender story.

All the characters are...well, like they should be, in character yet you bring your own little something extra to the mix. 

Will definitively be looking forward to reading more



Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying it, Sarah! And glad to keep you up past bed time too of course. One liners make the world go round and as for the before/after thing, I honestly needed to entertain myself with something fresh and seems like others are liking it too.

Reviewer: Manoline Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/09/07 04:05 pm
Title: Day 5 : Day 32

Another awesome chapter - this just keeps getting better and better...

Author's Response: Thanks I like to think so ;)

Reviewer: JLC Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/09/07 01:39 pm
Title: Day 5 : Day 32

Another great chapter, definitely keeps me waiting for more. Nice twist with Jarod designing Catherine's escape plan. Can't wait to see what comes next.

Thanks for sharing! 



Author's Response: Thanks, Cathy. I surprised myself with that one. :D

Reviewer: Cathy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17/09/07 02:36 am
Title: Day 5 : Day 32

oh NO!! stupid lyle and his stupid ever -present grin.  huge surprise that jarod was the one behind catherine's escape plans.  def didn't see THAT coming.  makes sense though.  good job.  jarod can not crack because they are hurting parker, he just caaaant! update soon!

Author's Response: Yay for surprise twists! Your reviews always make me happy because they are soooo passionate, as they should be.

Reviewer: soulmatefosho Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/09/07 08:01 pm
Title: Day 5 : Day 32

Whow! Great chapter!

Keep on writing!!!



Author's Response: Thank you I plan on it!

Reviewer: Morgan Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/09/07 07:05 am
Title: Day 5 : Day 32

Yay!  New chappie!  Great job as usual.  I'm *highly* intrigued.

Author's Response: Thanks! Very glad to have you *so* intrigued.

Reviewer: MP Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/09/07 06:44 am
Title: Day 5 : Day 32

So glad you've decided to update this fic.

  Another great chapter!



Author's Response: Thanks, I'm trying to keep up without simultaneously failing all my classes. ;)

Reviewer: D-18 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15/09/07 05:39 am
Title: Day 5 : Day 32

Very good chapter. I like where you're going with this story. Hope next chapter have some more of Jarod's day 33. ;-) Thanks for a good read.



Author's Response: Thank you! It will at least mention his day 33, but what Lyle said about what he was doing was pretty much it.

Reviewer: whashaza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/09/07 01:13 am
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