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Title: Day 2 : Day 29

Wonderful story you have here. I am so impressed by your creativity with the use of the dual timelines. It's a great idea and the way you're carrying it out is very effective. In addition, your characterizations truly capture the essence of their personalities as evident in the conversations.

However, as a result, I believe it is somewhat overly weighted with dialogue. It may improve the story to weave in some more descriptive parts like you did initially. Just a thought...

Great job. I can't wait for more; I hope you don't keep us waiting too long.



Author's Response:

Wow, well thank you very much. There is more dialogue, you're absolutely right. I love doing description, but usually feel more pressured to get on with the plot and what's going on. Now that I know someone else appreciates the description though, maybe I'll start adding more in. ;)

Reviewer: Topanga Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/08/07 11:43 am
Title: Day 2 : Day 29

yay!! ty... and now, more pls. :-) :-p

Author's Response: Hey, you're welcome! I'll try and get on that some time I suppoooose.

Reviewer: CrackerjacknPez Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/07 11:55 pm
Title: Day 2 : Day 29

Like your new story. Like how you are working with the two time lines.

Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response: Thank you, Morgan! I appreciate it.

Reviewer: Morgan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/08/07 01:45 pm
Title: Day 2 : Day 29

Very nice and exciting but then I'd expect nothing less from you!

Author's Response: I've gotta keep myself entertained too! Thanks, RaChell. You're such a good little reviewer.

Reviewer: RaChell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/07 11:18 am
Title: Day 2 : Day 29

A very nice chapter. The characters are spot on. I love your Miss Parker in snappy mode.

Thanks for sharing! 



Author's Response: Thanks, Cathy! Very sweet of you.

Reviewer: Cathy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/07 10:22 am
Title: Day 2 : Day 29

This is good and I liked MP's barbs....very so like her. ;-) Great job, looking forward to more.



Author's Response: Thank you! Strangely, her vicious quips come naturally for me which makes me wonder just how evil I am deep down. ;) But nothing gets more attention and agony than the Parker lines because they HAVE to be perfect.

Reviewer: whashaza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/08/07 12:36 am
Title: Day 2 : Day 29

this is so great! reading this story feels like acctually watching tP again. so real.

can't wait for more :o)

peace! 



Author's Response: Thank you! That's the best compliment you could give.

Reviewer: Jazzy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/08/07 12:17 am
Title: Day 2 : Day 29

i still find the layout of this story oh so fascinating!  favorite chappie ever..in life.



Author's Response: Thanks, friend! I didn't even realize how many references I'd made to you. Yay us.

Reviewer: soulmatefosho Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/08/07 09:57 pm
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