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Hey, I know it's probably been forever since you even thought about this story, but I just wanted to let you know there arew still some out here reading it! Your story is amazing- you capture the character's personalities so well. I could seriously envision this as part of the series/movies. 

   If you have the rest of the story, I'm sure I'm not the only one who would love to see the ending! I'm left hanging!

oh my God oh my God oh my God!!!!*jumping excitingly up and down*

 This was one of the BEST stories...if not so far the best, I've ever read!!!!

started at one day and just couldn't stopp reading (although I had lectures and exams,which was a bit complicated but hey!hehe)

You manage the 2 timelines (that can be very confusing and hard to handle for the writer I'm sure!) ,to say it with MP's words, "swwwwell"! Amazing, really!

Your first chapter got me hooked already since youmanage to capture the characters perfectly! The first few lines had me already laughing hard and thinking I was watching an episode of tp...*sigh* I do miss the show.  Especially that part was just a perfect J&MP conversation. I could see their faces in front of me haha! "

"So what is it this year, Jarod? Another dug up clue to my past, perhaps a sentimental piece of jewelry my mother might have worn one day in her life, or some other three ring circus you've concocted for the big hurrah?"

"Well, I did consider all of the above, but after thinking about it for a long time, I came to the conclusion that for your birthday I should give you the one thing you want more than anything else."

She feigned a high pitched voice of gratitude, "That's so sweet, Jarod. I guess you really are a genius after all if you've figured out how to hold a phone conversation whilst lying tied up and gagged at my doorstep.""

I'm sorry I won't manage to review on all of the chapters,but so far everything has been really well written and characterswere captured superb!

So i hope,DO HOPE, that you continue soon with this one. Because the last sentence of your last chapter has me left with thoughts such as "aaaahhh!! omg MissP what will happen to you?! what will happen to everybody?!!? what was in the scrolls?!!?...aahhh,this is so exciting!!"

hihihi. So if the way to get u to write further is to hassle u a bit,then I'll gladly oblige. ;-) 

keep on the excelent work!!!

hmmmm, so what was injected into MP? And what was on the disc that Angelo gave to Jarod?

Yay on the update. Bout time. ;-)

Looking forward to more, hopefully soon.

This story is put together in a very unique way.

It is well written with so much mystery yet to unfold. I like that you show the strength of MP/J when together! I've always thought that was why the Centre kept them apart.

I am so looking forward to the revelations we are going to learn through your story!

Hopefully you will be able to work more on it then your responsibilities have allowed so far... if not ... we will wait ;-)

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope my mysteries actually pan out the way I intend. Sometimes I forget about things I allude to haha. I'll try not do that though don't worry.

Happy now???? (whiney, bitchy little writers!  Give their Muses chocolates and roses and are they happy?  Heck no!  They want PEZ!  What next?  Another Pretender movie???)

Author's Response: HAHA YAY! I am so excited! Now I HAVE to write another chapter before 2008 because that is just going the extra mile.

Author's Response: Soon-ish?? I mean there was no PEZ to go with this review so I'll have to think about it.

 Excuse me!  But aren't you being picky here?  You want PEZ as well as a review?  Consider yourself  lucky you got a review!  

Great chapter, especially the interaction between Jarod and Miss Parker on Day 7. I have to agree with KatieQ, congrats to the "non-lame way" of incorporating the scrolls.

Thanks for sharing! 

I forgot to put a rating on my last comment. I also wanted to let you know that your dialogues are so spot on, that that's what keeps me reading. You really have the Jarod/Miss Parker relationship down to a science.

Hi! I have been following this developing story and really, really like it Its so exciting and I love how you have written it, not just the characters but the actual format of the story is a great way to tell this story. Great job! I really can't wait to read more.

Twingirl10

Great chapter!  I'm really loving the double time-lines.  It's so cool to be able to juxtapose the grim story at the Centre with the more hopeful story from 27 days earlier.  It really keeps the audience wondering (and reading).

Author's Response: That was my thinking too! It's a weird mix, but it makes it interesting to write/read... getting them from the optimistic point they're in in the earlier days to the inevitable fate of the later ones. Thanks for reviewing, I love it.

Dear TLM,

This story is more fantastic than the idea of four pretender movies, and that's really kind of a bfd. But honestly, I love this story already, I can tell that I've found another LTRA to fawn over, and I hope you're working on the next chapter because I'm already hooked.

With love,

Your Adoring Producer 

Bravo!  Fascinating beginning.  The whole double-timeline thing will certainly keep this one interesting.  Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks, I hope so! It's like two stories in one that come together (cohesively I hope).