Please, post the sequel, it's so good!!Reviewer: Miranda Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/06/07 02:55 pm
Nicely done and very riviting. You seem to have kept both Lyle and Miss Parker in character, not a easy feat. As long as you get the meaning of your story across, I'm sure everyone will forgive the spelling and grammatical errors.
And it's nice to see a author who posts without having to be poked with a sharp pointy stick.Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/06/07 08:11 pm
Very good! And I must say very sucessful in what you intended to get across in my humble opinion! Nicely done and am looking forward to the next chapter. Don't make us wait too long. I've been known to poke authors with a sharp pointy stick for dragging out the suspense..
Thanks man!!! Just updated the story.Reviewer: RaChell Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/07 05:52 pm
I love this story, and I've already reviewed on your other site. Reading this the second time seemed ever better! Love the way you wrote Miss Parker and Jarod. Well done.
Thanks, your story and writing style rock too.Reviewer: AJeff Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/07 10:44 pm
My god, it was really succesfull
I need to read more!! That chapter's end made me totally breathless!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment, was kinda scared of this chapter. Reviewer: Rita Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/06/07 04:07 pm
I like this one.
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 09/06/07 07:06 am
Please continue, love it.
Thank you, much appreciated.
Was scared about this chapter's effectiveness.Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 08/06/07 12:40 pm
Oh I think this is a fantastic beginning (to The End ha ha ha)! Manoline is right, the characters are portrayed very well. Good job and please continue.
Author's Response: Hehe, that was my private joke too. Couldn't think of a title hence this one. Thanks for the compliment.
Date: 07/06/07 01:17 pm
Oh very intriguing! Great introduction, I'm hooked from the start. I love that the characters talk like I would expect the character to, without it being clichê. And I do love flashbacks.
Hope you post the next chapter soon
Thanks for your review to my story, "The End." Much appreciated and definitely an encouragement to continue.Reviewer: Manoline Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/07 10:20 am